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 I like how all the text is centred around Helen to make her more significant and it is obvious that she is
the main character– Class member
 Now that the font is all the same colour, the red heels stand out more and the powerful lust
connotations are received better by the audience – Class member
 It is very simple but it works, the simple colours make the characters and their costumes stand out more
and it makes me intrigued to how this happy family are going to create “hell” - Friend