Dear Group,

I made complete changes to my 3 sided assignments. On my first draft I separated my sources into 3 different perspectives of stress. This draft I made a broad description of what the groups believed are involved in the academic conversation. I added parenthetical citations. I worked on adding topic sentences and transitioning. My piece is successful in fulfilling the purpose of the assignment. I explained each group, their viewpoint, and why they have that viewpoint. I also went into detail about what each group believed. My visual supplement was a picture of a college student carrying a load of books on his back. The books represent the causes of stress in college students for example, finals, loans, getting a job, making friends, and joining clubs.

Thanks,

Nakia Cornelius