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    The document discusses a peer review of a paper about creating a Harry Potter quidditch team. It addresses the main topics covered in the paper, including the goals and characteristics of teams. It also discusses the use of language and communication in the paper. The peer review notes that the paper provides useful insights into building a quidditch team and managing the challenges of funding and player recruitment. While there is good information presented, the peer review suggests that some reorganizing or cutting could help the overall flow.

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    The document discusses a peer review of a paper about creating a Harry Potter quidditch team. It addresses the main topics covered in the paper, including the goals and characteristics of teams. It also discusses the use of language and communication in the paper. The peer review notes that the paper provides useful insights into building a quidditch team and managing the challenges of funding and player recruitment. While there is good information presented, the peer review suggests that some reorganizing or cutting could help the overall flow.

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    The document discusses a peer review of a paper about creating a Harry Potter quidditch team. It addresses the main topics covered in the paper, including the goals and characteristics of teams. It also discusses the use of language and communication in the paper. The peer review notes that the paper provides useful insights into building a quidditch team and managing the challenges of funding and player recruitment. While there is good information presented, the peer review suggests that some reorganizing or cutting could help the overall flow.

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    Peer Review #2: Zach Jones - What is the writers DC? o The Harry Potter quidditch team. Many goals and characteristics of teams - How has the author addressed terms such as Literacy, language, lexix, and discourse? o Lots of language and different lends in the paper, lots of communication. - Does this paper lead to a so what? o Lots of insight to a different world teachers all the things you must know. - What sources of outside information does the writer use? o Uses lots of information - What conflicts have they addressed? o Address conflicts of money and finding players for the teams - Anything else? Lots and lots of good information but maybe some could be cut out ot make it flow better (grouping, just compl

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