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GOODBYE HIGH SCHOOL BY CHLOE WAKELING

When Olivia talks about the popular girl, I will use a wide shot to show the popular girl walking across the playgrou nd.

Olivia is sitting on a bench. Shots that can used here:

FADE IN INT: PLAYGROUND DAYTIME SCENE 1 OLIVIA (17) is sitting on the bench VOICEOVER

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Mid Shot to show off Olivia and her clothes, face expression and location Close Up - This shot can be used to show Olivias face expressions Extreme Close Up We can use this shot to show the eyes of Olivia and where she is looking

Some people think that school is the best of times and the worst of times, with the so called popular girl prancing around, with God playing a practical joke on her with beauty but no brains, and with a moustache that we all know that she waxes. Like the girl over there, you couldnt miss here with the ET glow and the look of everyone loves me but in fact everyone hates her. OLIVIA is still sitting on the bench and tilts her head to one side then the other The same people in EVERY sports team; even though he is rubbish at sports in general. And so even when we lose the yearly football match against Ilford Country High School, he still manages to win sportsman of the year. Like the boy over there, making out he is the comedian of the year, and tripping up anyone who comes near him that could be considered too nerdy or freaky. But for me school is a waste of time, half the people I know at the moment I will forget their names in five years. And hopefully this is dump they call A Educational Foundation But as I said school is the best of times and the worst of times. OLIVIA is still sitting on the bench. CUT TO SCENE 2 VOICEOVER Thinking back to my school life, and I have to admit there have been some embarrassing moments in my life to tripping over endlessly and balls hitting me on the head in dodge ball.
I will use a variety of angles when shooting the start of the film such as eye level and high angle. I use different angles to show what she is looking at and also to see more of the character and her important face expressions.

When Olivia looks at the jock, I will use a wide shot to display the jock surroun ded by girls, this adds to the stereot ype of a jock.

INT: SPORTS HALL DAYTIME FLASHBACK

In the sports scene I will use a Long Shot to show off what Olivia is wearing and also the location so the audience can see that is a sports hall. It also allows seeing if anyone runs into the background

OLIVIA is in the sports hall, about to catch the ball. A ball from the opposite direction had hit her on the head. OLIVIA trips slightly causing her not to catch the ball. OLIVIA just stands there embarrassed. EXT: PLAYGROUND DAYTIME
In this part, I can use a Mid Shot from where she is sitting into a Long Shot to show that she is walking away from the bench and towards the doors, I also use a Pan to follow Olivia action into the building

Olivia is still on the bench; she grabs her bag and flask and heads towards the doors. OLIVIA is looking through a classroom door/window. CUT TO SCENE 3 FLASHBACK
When the girls are laughi ng at her, I will use a wide shot to show all the girls laughi ng at here adds to the eleme nt of embar rassm ent seeing I will use a close to show Olivia looking through the door, the close up displays her face expression well.

VOICEOVER

The most embarrassing moment although happened in this classroom, year 8 it happened. I would never forget it. INT: CLASSROOM DAYTIME OLIVIA is sitting on a chair, and is about to get up when she cant. There is a confused look on her face. She tries again and is successful. OLIVIA walks out the classroom. INT: SCHOOL CORRIDOR DAYTIME OLIVIA is walking down the corridor VOICEOVER What I didnt realise that there was chewing gum stuck on my skirt and that is how I got my name gumbum. Yep. Wonderful memories. Wonderful nicknames. It cant get any worse can it? Well it did. I only realised that I had been walking around with gum stuck to my bum when I looked on Facebook that night. So great, the whole school knew. Just what I needed. My ass stuck on the internet forever with gum stuck to it with the tag gumbum.
In the first part of the scene I will use a long shot to show off the location, makes the audience aware of the location, then I move on to a mid-shot to display here school uniform and here chair,. I will have the camera facing her back, so when she turns around to investigate the laughters she will look straight into the camera. I will use eye level for this scene well.

CUT TO SCENE 4 FLASHBACK EXT: OFFICE DOORS DAYTIME OLIVIA is now working out of some doors. VOICEOVER

For this scene I will start with a long shot to show a change of location, I will then move into a Mid-Shot to show more detail in the reflective manner of her first relationship here.

I remember my first relationship out here, well my first break up anyways. This happened in year 11. EXT: OFFCIE ENTRANCE DAYTIME PETER and OLIVIA are sitting on a bench PETER
In this scene I will use a MidShot for both Olivia and Peter to show what both characters are wearing and also the location.

Look there is something that I need to talk to you about okay honey? I havent been completely honest with who I am really or just who I am. As you properly noticed I am quite into people like Gok Wan and Kylie Minogue and fashion so there is not really an easy way to say this to you butI am gay. OLIVIA just sits there with a shock looked on her face, emotionless. VOICEOVER I should have seen it coming. Jazz hands. Check. Man purse. Check. Glitter blazer. Check. Yep I was dating a gay dude. How embarrassing. For jazz hands, man
purse and glitter blazer I will use a CUT TO SCENE 5 close up of each object to amplify EXT: MAIN SCHOOL DOORS EVENING significance of the objects OLIVIA is walking out of the doors and heading for the exit of

As you do I made out I ended it with him.

the school VOICEOVER University, ucas points, open days, degrees and student finance this has all been shoved down my throat by the head of year. I am going to uni, yep me a student for another four years working on my degree to be a doctor. Yep ditzy, little old I got in to Cambridge. So up yours popular girl and sports
For this scene I will use a long shot to show Olivia walking out of her school, this shot also shows the location of the final scene.

As Olivia walks out of the school I pan to follow her action, this shows the transit ion from her school

man of the year, who by the way are now working in Tescos as life employees. Dumb asses. OLIVIA is still walking down path towards the exit doors. VOICEOVER The best time of my life and the worst time of my life, I think I would certainly have to agree with old dickens there. Lets see if hes right about uni INT: STREET EVENING OLIVIA is walking out the gates with the gates completely shutting. FADE OUT
I the final shot of the film I will use a long shot to show her walking down the street to show her finally leaving her school. In her final speech I will use a Mid-Shot to show her looking at the Oaks Park High School Sign and shrugging at the camera

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