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TOEFL 作 文 常 見 的 23 種 錯 誤
TOEFL 作 文 常 見 的 23 種 錯 誤
TOEFL 作 文 常 見 的 23 種 錯 誤
關於 TOEFL 考試作文相信大家都買了不少參考書,並且背誦了不少好段子,
但是有的考生依舊作文不理想,究其原因在寫作時可能不太在意,讓我們看看
專家怎麼評點 TOEFL 考試作文的常見錯誤的……
1.結構不平行例:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read
lots of books.當使用連詞將一系列的單詞聯接起來的時候,應當使用詞性相同或
同一類型的短語。
2.不知所云例:Many companies began using computers mouth.
3.段落過長,不分段主語與動詞一致問題 She are a good friend of mine that I has
known for a long time.主語和動詞在數方面不一致。
4.句子彆扭 We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the
container changed.措辭過長或不清。換言之,句子顯得滑稽可笑。
5.不要使用縮寫在正式的寫作中不要使用縮寫形式
(can‘t,don‘t,it‘s,we‘ll,they‘ve 等等),而應當使用單詞的完整形式
(cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have 等等)。
7.句子不完整 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to
getsintoscollege. For example, my friend in high school.句子沒有主要主語或主要動
詞,因為其實它應是一個從句。這是一個非常常見的錯誤,修改的方法是將兩個
句子連接起來。
8.不要使用 get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and gotsintosbed. Get 太
不正式,意思也過於含糊,不適合用在正式的場合。應將 get 改為一個更加具體
的單詞,如 become, receive, find, achieve,等等。
9.書寫難以辨認資訊不正確 I would like to study in America because all modern
technology originated there.傳的資訊不正確,或者讓人聽起來覺得可能不正確(如
果確實是正確的,應當解釋為什麼這樣,因為讀者不認為是正確的)。上述例句
中,all 的意思是百分之百;我們不能絕對地說每一件新東西都是從美國誕生的。
為保險起見,應當使用 many 或 most。非英語單詞 Computers are very helpful and
advantageable.儘管看起來象個單詞,其實不是,至少不是個英文單詞。使用這個
單詞的另一種形式。
10.介詞多餘 I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned
about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When
I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate
never mentioned about her husband.在表示這種意思時此單詞不能與介詞連用。這
種情況常見於 downtown,home,there,here 等詞。這些詞語在英語中是副詞而
非名詞,因而不能在它們前面添加介詞。
11.跑題或不相關 There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.這個意
思與文章的主題無關。
17.語氣與文章不符 I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me.
I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London,
Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.語氣
與文章其他部分不相符可能是過於正式或者太不正式。
18.代詞指代不明 If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of
miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they
have good programs there.代詞所指代的指示詞(介詞所代替的名詞)不清楚。
19.過於籠統 We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting
worse.句子或它所表達的意思過於籠統,不能提供多少資訊。