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Literacy Analysis
Structure of the passag e The text 1: What meaning was conveyed? Inferences and Secret English Each Peach Pear Plum Apples Peaches Pears and Plums nursery rhyme 2: Why it was included? Authors intentionality To introduce the first of the nursery rhymes
Class: Kindergarten
3 and 4: How was the meaning created? Structure, word and language choices, grammar Rhyming of each and peach ch sound So What? Teaching implications Informing Writing workshops NA
Passage 1
I spy Tom Thumb
Passage 2
* The Authors is giving the first clue for the I Spy game. * 2nd fairytale Tom Thumb * Illustrations Tom Thumb hiding in tree.
* I introducing the Author as the lead role in the story. * spy action for game * Tom Thumb introducing first character * Rhyming - Plum / Thumb um sound * in the cupboard location of Tom Thumb (adverb - where) * Mother Hubbard intros 2nd Character * Rhyming cupboard / Hubbard board sound * down the cellar location of Mother Hubbard (adverb - where) * Cinderella intros 3rd Character * Rhyming cellar / Cinderella ellar sound
* Locate Tom Thumb * Second clue in game * 3rd nursery rhyme Old Mother Hubbard * Illustrations - Mother Hubbards bottom, bottom right * Locate Mother Hubbard * Third clue in game * 4th fairy tale Cinderella * Illustrations Cinderellas arm dusting, right of centre
* Tells where Tom Thumb is hiding * To introduce Mother Hubbard into the story/game
Passage 3
Passage 4
C.McLennan
2013
* Locate Cinderella * Fourth clue in game * 5th fairy tale The Three Bears * Illustrations Three Bears in the window
Passage 5
* on the stairs location of Cinderella (adverb - where) * Three Bears intros 4th Character * Rhyming stairs / Bears airs sound * out hunting location of The Three Bears (adverb - where) * Baby Bunting intros 5th Character * Rhyming hunting / Bunting unting sound * fast asleep location of Baby Bunting (adverb - where) * Bo-Peep intros 6th Character * Rhyming asleep / Bo-Peep eep sound * up the hill location of BoPeep (adverb - where) * Jack and Jill intros 7th Character * Rhyming hill / Jill ill sound
* Locate The Three Bears * Fifth clue in game * 6th nursery rhyme Baby Bunting * Illustrations Baby Bunting in basket was hanging from tree * Locate Baby Bunting * sixth clue in game * 7th nursery rhyme Little Bo-Peep * Illustrations- Bo-Peep hiding in paddock
* Tells where The Three Bears are hiding * To introduce Baby Bunting
Passage 6
Passage 7
I spy Bo-Peep
* Locate Bo-Peep * seventh clue in game * 8th nursery rhyme Jack and Jill * Illustrations Jack and Jill tumbling down hill
Passage 8
I spy Jack and Jill
C.McLennan
2013
* Locate Jack and Jill * eighth clue in game * 9th nursery rhyme Hansel and Gretel The Wicked Witch * Illustrations Wicked Witch hiding behind bush * Locate Wicked Witch * ninth clue in game * 10th fairytale Robin Hood * Illustrations Robin Hoods arrow
Passage 9
* in the ditch location of Jack and Jill (adverb - where) * Wicked Witch intros 8th Character * Rhyming ditch / witch ich sound * over the wood location of the Wicked Witch (adverb - where) * Robin Hood intros 9th Character * Rhyming wood / hood ood sound * in his den location of the Robin Hood (adverb - where) * Returns to Three Bears Characters * Rhyming den/again en sound * still hunting what Three Bears are doing (adverb - time) * Returns to Baby Bunting * Rhyming hunting / Bunting unting sound
Passage 10
* Locate Robin Hood * tenth clue in game * Returns to Three Bears fairytale * Illustrations - Three Bears behind trees * Returns to previous characters * Three Bears are now part of the game * Brings another character back to story * Illustrations Baby Bunting under the bridge
Passage 11
Passage 12
* Reintroduces Three Bears * Continues the game making reader audience instead of player
C.McLennan
2013
* Describes how Baby Bunting is * 11th clue in the game * 11th nursery rhyme Little Jack Horner Plum Pie * Illustrations Plum Pie blanket in yard * Locates Plum Pie * Illustrations everyone hiding throughout page * 12th Clue in game * Solves clue * Illustrations everyone eating pie
Passage 13
* safe and dry how Baby Bunting is (adverb - how) * Intros Plum Pie (Little Jack Horner) * Rhyming dry /pie i sound
Passage 14
I spy EVERYONE!
* in the sun where is the Plum Pie (adverb - where) * EVERYONE! capital letter and ! to show emphasis * Rhyming sun /everyone un sound
C.McLennan
2013