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cohe;ent and engaging? Does the plot follow The Hero's Journey template. Next steps: Are there sensory details and descriptions that allow
the reader to visualize the storv? ls the story told in a logical, interesting order? Next steps: Does the writer include an engaging lead, satisfying conclusion, and transition words? Does the writer include properly formatted dialogue?
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tool to better understand the characters and their actions. Does the writer use active verbs, and precise vocabulary to convey meaning? ls the authorrs voice evident and engaging? Next steps: sensory details, dialogug unique expression of ideas, and imagery, Do sentences vary in length and structure? Next steps: Are a variety of phrases and chlses emoloved effectivelv? ls the writing clean, clear, and free of errors?' Are words spelled correctly, is the verb tense consistent throughout the piece, and are all necessary punctuation mark included? Does the writer show evidence of revision? Have words, sentences, and paragraphs been added or deleted in order to make the piece stionser and more effective?
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Grading:

Papers that do need yet meet standard in one or more categories will receive 75 or lower. Papers that meet or exceed standard in all categories will receive 80 or higher. Papers that exceed standard in some categories may receive 90 or higher.