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ELP - Work 9.editing 2
ELP - Work 9.editing 2
ELP - Work 9.editing 2
Content Analysis
You, as the editor, are to write a critique of your partner’s paper. The critique needs to
include the following:
1. Describe what you think is the author’s main point. Underline and example.
3. Evaluate the paper, paragraph by paragraph, in terms of flow, transitions, structure and
content.
5. How focused does the author stay on the main point throughout the piece? Give an
example of tight focus, and an example of an unfocused part.
6. Describe the conclusion. Does it bring the reader full circle? If not, suggest how the
author might approach it.
7. Cite at least two specific points the author did well. Give examples.
8. Point out at least two specific points the author needs to work on. Give examples.
Mechanics
Use the following checklist to determine the writing’s strengths and weaknesses in terms of
grammar, word usage, structure, etc. Mark any mechanical problems on the paper as well as
providing specific written comments. Mark various elements (+ or -) and make comments: