Komang Riya Laksmi Dewi XI IPA6 36

Hortatory Exposition

[I]
To improve comfort and cleanliness at our school, a number of dust bins should be increased. When we look at classrooms, school corridors and school yard, there are papers, mineral water cups, straws, and napkins here and there. The condition of uncleanliness and discomfort really hinders learning and teaching environment. Litters thrown carelessly cause disease, especially empty plastic cups or glasses. They can be filled out with water coming from the rain. This can be placed for dengue mosquitoes to spread out. Besides, these rubbish can deteriorate the scene. Well painted wall and green school yard do not mean anything if litters are scattered everywhere. Anyway I notice that most of the students in our school have responsibilities for their school environment. They put their litters on the proper place. But some are not diligent enough to find the dust bins. The numbers of dust bins in our school are not enough. More dust bins should be put beside each of steps, outside of classrooms, and some more along the corridors. Probably one dust bin should be in every ten meters. So when students want to throw away their litters, they can find the dust bins easily. When school in equipped with sufficient dust bins, we do not have problems of filth and discomfort any more. Our school will be very clean and become a nice place to study.

Riya,36

Komang Riya Laksmi Dewi XI IPA6 36

[Ii]
Continued progress in advanced techlogy is not necessary. Already the technical progress in our world has caused severe pollution in the air and in the water. Although the technical progress in previous years has been helpful, recent technology has significantly increase pollution. Another reason to stop technical progress is that many inventions which were developed for good causes are now also used for powerful weapons or have been found to have serious side effects. For example, pesticide put inside particle boards to prevent termites has now been found to be toxic to human life. Technology does not always bring good effects; for example, computer do much work faster than man, but then man loses his job to mechine. Because no man can guarantee that technology will have good effects and will be used only for the benefit of man, we should delay the continued development of technology.

Riya,36