Sum up your feedback I got equally just as much positive along with improvements.

I got good feedback on how I am going to do the fairytale into more of a novel than a traditional childrens book and how Im going to use my own models etc to create the novel and having it all my own to make it original. I also got commented on how I expanded my ideas to make my point in further detail and how they got a general idea of my ideas from it and visual ideas from my mood board. I got comments on how to improve to. I got told to re think my target audience and who it is appealing t as its a fairytale and to provide more images on my mood board to get some more visual imagery of how it will look. I also got told to re word some of the things about the audience to make it clearer to the audience what I want to do.

What do you agree with in your feedback and why? I agree that my the target audience needs to be re thought about even though if its a more dark, comic book, it will appeal to mainly young adults/teenagers as I explained. I also agree that I went into detail with my mind maps and expanded my points to help get my ideas across about it being more modern and my own photos etc to create it my own. I also agree I should go into more detail about my story so there is more of an idea of what will be happening in my novel. I do think that the wolf being a shadow is a good idea to add though and consider.

What do you not agree with in your feedback and why? I dont agree with the fact someone couldnt find my mind map when other people had found it which shows that they havent looked to find it so I didnt get as much feedback on that section. I also dont agree that I should have had another mind map as I was being specific with my ideas with one of them and what I wanted to do so I dont see the need in creating another one. I dont agree that I need to specify what parts will be a darker colour as its going to be a mysterious novel and be dark as in gloomy and not a bright and cheerful novel.