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The Boy in the Striped Pajamas Introductory Paragraph

Component Hook Narrowing Detail FATt Thesis Statement

What it needs Introduces the general topic of the paragraph. Hooks and keeps attention. Explains the main idea of the hook, narrowing it down into the specific thesis. Includes, in your chosen logical order: Focus- Bruno is multi-dimensional: ___________ and, yet, __________ Author- John Boyne Title- The Boy in the Striped Pajamas type- novel

Points ____/25 ____/25 ____/25

Conventions

1. Capitalization 2. Word Choice- needs effective transitions, needs complex vocabulary, NO I think--needs more confident word choices, clever and relevant title 3. Grammar 4. Spelling 5. Punctuation- commas, periods

____/25 * minus one per mistake ___100

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