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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is (Monkey D Luffy) and Im a junior high school student in (Maebashi, Japan). I want to visit (Ayers Rock) because I think that (the desert and mountains) (is/are) (fantastic). (__free sentence__) (__free sentence__) visit in Australia)? Thank you, (Monkey D Luffy) When I go there, I want to (climb the rock). (__free sentence__) Can you send me some (English websites) about (other popular places to

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Crazy Good 20 40 Flow

Okay
Flow is a little bad.

Try Harder
A lot of missing information. 2 + misses

Student followed the example.

I want to visit I think that When I go there I want to send me

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(p 54) one miss (p28) (p14) (p57) (p66)

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Sentence Rules + Used big letters, periods, Word Spelling

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one miss

2 + misses

and comas correctly. All words are good. Wrote 7 + sentences. Free sentences have 6+ words. 6 sentences. Free Sentences are short. 5-0 sentences. Free Sentences are short.

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