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Drake (Final Revision)
Drake (Final Revision)
Drake (Final Revision)
By Steve Eum
It all started that night. Fire, screams, pain, and a dark glowing eye. The night I can’t
remember. All I know is that it took my parents away. As my life went on I slowly forgot that
night, the same way most people forget bad memories. It just slowly disintegrates within your
brain. I was treated differently because of my petite stature. I lived alone in the harsh wilderness
of the mountain. Completely have forgetting what had happened that night. But some part of me
just knew, and that part gave me the will to survive and thrive.
As a kid I had a miserable life. Growing up as an orphan without any adult guidance was
difficult. I built somewhat of a shelter up in the woods. I ate berries and vegetation. When I got
old enough for schooling, I attended without hesitation. Being smaller than everyone else, I was
picked on. Every day I prayed that the others would leave me alone. And every day I came home
with bruises and scars. The scar on my body didn’t hurt me enough to stop me from attending
As I hit my pre-teenage years, I kept true to myself, set up goals in life. No matter what I
wanted to marry that pretty girl that rode the horse through the woods every day. I never quite
It was a steamy summer afternoon. I sat in the shade to avoid the unforgiving sting of the
sun, hungrily wondering what to catch for my next meal. Suddenly, I heard a shriek then a cry
for help. I stood up and slowly and cautiously looked around. That’s when I saw her. Her
massive white horse tripped on a rock and was kicking into the air. With her in the way of those
deadly hooves, I ran to rescue. As I neared her my heart started to race. Faster and faster it was
beating. Time slowed down around me. And just before one of the hooves swung towards her
head, I jumped, caught her firmly in my arms and quickly and swiftly I rolled away with her. I
got up, stood there huffing and puffing. Then I saw her burst into tears and gasped as she pointed
at the back of my neck. I suddenly hit with a great pain. I reached over with my hands and they
came back painted with carmine red. The fiery color triggered something in my brain.
Then I saw nothing. My mind went blank. Slowly, figures started to form. Now
everything was red and black. I saw hazy red triangles floating and dancing. I heard distorted
noise that sounded very desperate. Although the figures didn’t scare me, I was somehow eaten up
by fear. I couldn’t breathe; it felt like smoke had filled the air. I was choking and terrified. I tried
running but everything followed me. I ran in a tunnel to hide. Then I saw a light at the end of the
tunnel. I ran faster and faster with the horribly gruesome haze reaching closer and closer to grasp
me and pull me back in. Just as I reached the end, to the extent where my hands would touch this
mysterious light, I was being pulled back. I fought the grim cloud pushing as hard as I could,
toward the shine. Just before I ran out of strength to fight, the light spoke.
That very moment, the light radiated like a thousand suns. It blasted away my fear and
That’s when I woke up, gasping for breath. I looked at my new surroundings. I was
extremely confused. I saw white floor with white walls with windows that were also white. Then
As I limped quickly towards the door I heard her say “Wait! What’s your name?”
I ran through the great halls and looked for an exit. There was a guard who tried to stop me. I
slipped through his grasp with ease. His big, clumsy suit of armor traded speed for defense. I
found a great big door with more guard by it. Dodging left to right, I escaped the huge building
and ran back home. I calmed myself down and decided to go to bed early.
Pearl, I thought to myself as I lie on my bed. She was very attractive and kind. I like the
way her hair swayed in the wind. Her glittering blue eyes reminded me of the first falling snow
of each year. The way she made my heart beat passionately for her. I thought of her as I lay in
bed trying to sleep. Then I noticed a cold and heavy feeling on my chest. I looked at it. There lied
a golden yellow pendant shaped like a mushroom with a blue ice-like stone in the middle of it. I
knew it was from Pearl. I clenched my fist over it and lifted it high up against my breast, waiting
until the day when she would come galloping on her horse.
Sadly she didn’t come. She never came after that incident. Day after day I waited. Every
little rustle sounded like her footsteps, but all those sounds just gave me hope and crush them
unforgiving sting of the sun like before. I heard some rustling footsteps. By this point I could
distinguish many different noises so I knew it wasn’t Pearl. Instead a tall, muscular, and rugged
He spoke to me in a deep and friendly tone “Hey, kid. How ya’ doin’?”
“Sorry to break it to you, kid, but the king ordered every teenager to be drafted,” he said.
“Yeah, you’ll be trained and all that but the good thing is that you be living in a better
Without hesitation I got up. I was bored out of my mind anyways so I gave this army
thing a try.
First day, I saw a kid get beaten up and thrown out in the street because he didn’t try hard
enough. He wasn’t suited for the rage of war. As I walked into the facility, I was amazed at the
great living condition it provided. They had free clothes, spacious rooms, comfortable beds, and
the best of all good food. This place was like heaven to me. I put a lot of hard effort into training
everyday to make sure I stayed here. Due to this effort, I unintentionally became the best. I was
the fastest runner, swimmer, and horse rider, the best swordfighter, archer, and spearman. I was
also the most physique, taller and more muscular than anyone else.
Soon, I found out the reason for this draft. The king of the Mushroom Kingdom, Deedior,
got fed up with the constant raids that occurred in his land. The culprits were the neighboring
tribes of Turteliods, a mean, vicious, and barbaric groups of tribes that wanted more land. In this
war they were outnumbered yet we were far out powered. A renegade Turteliodian brigadier can
I soon became an Elite General and my troops and I were ready for battle. We got
approval from the king, and we started marching. Through vast plains and rugged foothills we
marched. For 7 days and seven nights we only stopped to sleep. My troops were the finest, hand
selected by me and equipped with all the supplies they needed. They never complained or
whined. They were strong enough to handle this great trip. On the eighth day we passed through
a raided village.
It was the most gruesome and horrifying scene I had ever seen. Fire was everywhere.
Houses were destroyed and looted. It was as if God lit a tornado on fire, lost control over it and
dropped it on the poor little town. I could smell the stench of the slaughtered hundreds. I then
I couldn’t answer. I started rolling on the ground, clenching my fist. There was
something in my head that tried to get out. The agony was unbearable. The feeling moves down
my neck and sunk its caustic teeth in to my heart. I pounded at my chest. They it started to crawl
over to my shoulder, down my biceps and finally onto my forearm. It snaked under my skin as if
it were my own vein. I formed a sharp and distorted figure. The pain suddenly increased.
“Ah~ Errahha~,” the pain burned my skin like it was being stenciled. The pigment started
to darken and finally the torturous pain ceased.
My men helped me up, still in awe and not being able to believe or comprehend what had
just happened. I looked at my forearm. It was still smoking. As the wisp was blown by the wind,
I noticed a very majestic being had been drawn onto my arm, a dragon. Encircling the figure was
a circle with archaic words around it. Drops of blood were oozing out like sweat. I was
extremely puzzled but it didn’t deter me further. I simply wiped the blood off with a ripped piece
of cloth on the ground and continued to walk. Then my troops hesitantly followed soon going
Not very far off the raided town we spotted a hostage caravan full of our people. With
quick thinking and movement, we set up an ambush in a little alley along their path. We lay as
flat as we could on a ledge positioned just a few feet above the Turtliodians head. When all the
soldiers were in the alley, we slit all of there throats with a quick, clean maneuver. We then got
That’s when I saw her. Pearl. I walked over to her. Smiling. I wanted to say so many
things. Thoughts were running around in my mind. Then I stopped. Her necklace had a familiar
symbol on it. A golden mushroom with the royal gem, aquamarine, inserted in the middle of the
mushroom cap. It was similar to the necklace that I wore every day. I didn’t care much about it
other than it used to belong to her. Then I realized that it was a Royal pendant. I fully understood
now that she was the princess of our kingdom. I took my necklace out of my armor and looked at
it. It was full of dents and scratches, lightly soiled and quite tarnished. I put it back just as I
noticed her walking my way. I put my head down and tried to avoid her. The overjoyed hostages
running around pushed me even closer to her. I bumped into her and continued to walk while
muttering a mere, “Sorry,” I felt that it was over with.
But she turned around and said “Drake? Is that you?” she said, full of anticipation. My
body froze. My chest started to tighten. I couldn’t breathe. I tried to calm down. The moment my
body loosened up, I ran, crying. I was running from the only girl I ever loved after I longed for
“You’re so stupid Drake,” I insulted myself. I secretly rejoined my troops and we all
slept.
The next day I sent a message to the king and left some of my men to watch over the
hostages while the escort squad I requested arrived. Then we finally reached the heart of all there
camps, Turtloidika. I watched these savage beast do thing that I dare not to tell. Made me gag.
We set up a camp and I sat in my tent. As I was thinking, an old man passed by and let out a very
eerie aura. He wasn’t one of us. I knew something about him was different. I had to follow him. I
pursued him into a maze-like cave. Inside there was a huge chamber with strange markings on
“Oh, I know much more than your name. I led you here so I can help you,” said the voice
very persuasively “You have powers that you are not aware of yet. I can help you but I need you
I stared into the vicious looking tattoo that I now had. Then I notice the markings around
“Come over here child,” I approached the shadow cautiously yet at a steady pace. In the
middle of the circular chamber, he stood by a cauldron of some sort. It bubbled away a thick,
“Hold out your arm,” he said. Then he took out a piece of carved wood, a wand perhaps
and pointed toward my marking as I let him place it above the cauldron. He whispered some
words as the tip of his wand started to glow. “Emplari… Aiur… Adun… Toridas…”
The figure started to fade and the man’s eyes let out a beam of light. Now my marking
glowed and the light became more and more intense. It shone the whole chamber. I tried to pull
away but he held fast. I heard him say, “I’m Damdien. Follow your instincts,” and his voice
faded.
I woke up back at my tent. I was confused. Yet I had an outburst of incredible and
awesome energy. It flowed through my body and it lingered in my hand. I shook my hand hoping
to rid the unusually heavy feeling. Instead the energy poured out in blue flames from each of my
finger tips. Then my head felt fresh. My head felt as if I stuck it in a portal that leads to the top of
the Elvish Mountains. Now my memories cleared and I had a flash back of my past.
Those hazy pictures that had lingered in my in my head were now crystal clear. Those
dancing triangles now turned to fire. The distorted noises were now desperate calls for help
mixed in with death. I saw a little boy cry next to two bodies lying on the floor. I knew that this
little boy was me. My parents, were dead. I watched the savage beast leave the scene. It was too
late. I couldn’t stop him. My past self screamed at him. He turned around. I noticed that he had a
“Pathetic, little brat,” he said with the coldest and most evil tone I ever heard. I saw his
yellow eyes with a great big scar running from his forehead to the middle of his cheek while
cutting through his eye. His armor was shining in the moon light. Every jagged pieces of him suit
He then said “Remember the name lil’ punk. Craygon,” he spat on me and left, laughing.
I then came back to my senses. I now remembered his name. “Craygon…,” I said to
myself. It was now day time and I had wasted enough time. Just then a bloody wounded soldier
of mine came running to me. Clutching him arm, he informed me that another group of Turtloids
came and took back the hostages. I had to go rescue Pearl. I told my soldier to get ready for hell.
Without much hesitation my troops infiltrated the camp. Many died. I swung at
everything that was bigger than me. That way I wouldn’t accidentally wound a fellow soldier.
There were screaming everywhere. Arrows whizzed by your ear every five seconds. I fought the
hoards that came at me. They were very strong and powerful. Yet in the end I got to the “castle.”
I went in there. My instincts told me that Craygon was the leader of the Turtleloids. I cried out to
him, “ Craygon!”
Then suddenly my sword burst in to blue flames. The energy overflowed. I didn’t care. I
ran, climbing the castle stairs while slicing open every one that was in my way. Love had made
me go berserk. I reached the top of the stairs and arrived at a huge room with red carpet dividing
the room. The blood on my sword boiled and vaporized altering the metal’s surface now making
the flame black. I saw a massive throne at the end of the carpet. There he was. He had a scrawny
little wizard with him. The wizard was looking in a crystal ball and constantly mumbling thing to
him.
“My servant tells me that this little whore is your lover,” he held up a girl who had
I charged at him in rage. I swung my sword only to get blocked by his great big battle
axe. He pushed me off sending me flying through the air. I crashed through two stone pillars and
the third one stopped me. I exploded out of the pile of rubble and ran towards him. I kept my fire
sword held at the hip and sliced the ground as I prepared to make and upward slash.
“Do you really think you can kill me?” he said. He then stood up high and with both
hands, hit the ground with the handle of his battleaxe. The shock wave created enough turbulence
to send couple waves of rock towards me. I jumped. From rock to rock, I moved towards him.
Trying hard not to lose me foothold I got past all the waves except one. This wave had a giant
slab of rock quaking its way towards me. I charged at it and jumped high as I can. Holding my
sword behind me I struck while coming down upon the ground. The slab opened enough for me
to slip through before it crashed down and fell. Still on the ground, I looked up at him. I could
see in his eyes that the evil pride had turn in to fear.
He said with a shaken voice, “Enough of this crap,” he then swung his axe at Pearl.
I ran as fast as I could. As I neared her my heart started to race. Faster and faster it
was beating. Time slowed down around me. And just before the axe hit her, I jumped, caught her
firmly in my arms and quick and swiftly I rolled away with her. Then with all my strength I
slashed at his neck I created a crescent blade of flames that decapitated him. He went down with
a great fall as his tainted blood spilled all over the place. The wizard looked at me. I looked back
at him. He casted a spell and with a big poof he vanished into thin air. I woke Pearl up. I held her
She stared into my eye as she said, “Is that really you Drake?”
I believe that the right moment was then, “I love you,” I said.
“I love you too,” she replied as she moved closer to me. Then she gave me a kiss as we
I returned to my kingdom after killing every single one of our enemy. I asked the king for
his daughter’s hand in marriage. He gladly accepted. We lived happily ever after and when the
“And so this is my story children,” I said to the little boys and girls. “ My life, adventure
“ I’m sorry little ones but the king has to rest now,” said Pearl. “ Run along now,” she
said as she gestured them to leave. Pearl walked over to me and we watched the children run out
of the castle. Then I looked at both my necklaces. One, a golden yellow mushroom with an
aquamarine in the middle that looked like Pearl’s eyes and the other, dented and scratched lightly
soiled and quite tarnished. I stared deeply into those two little pendants. Then I let out a long
peaceful sigh.
Fin.