First Edit Peer Assessment #2

Area
TITLES Order

Strengths
I like that the last title is the director most important credit Very clear I like the white on the black as it complements the black and white image The centred titles also make the titles clear and look important I like that the transition isnt too long and that the titles dont linger The doll helped with the genre conventions N/a Panning was effective N/a The use of cuts and dissolves helped vary the transitions I like the use of children, it means you feel more sympathy towards the characters The location looks a little scary, with the addition of the creaking swing N/a

Targets

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Font choices Colours

Positioning

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Transitions

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CINEMATOGRAPHY/EDITING Mise-en-scene Range of shot types Camera angles/movements Pace Editing effects/transitions INTRODUCTION OF: Characters & relationships

N/a N/a N/a N/a N/a

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Locations

N/a I didnt really understand the older girls involvement in the story, because I thought it was a flashback, but then the scene carried on. N/a N/a

Storyline

Genre Enigma codes SOUND Suitability of soundtrack/score to genre Pace matched to pace of visuals Audio levels

Good relation to horror The red ribbon was a really good idea Eerie music Shot change matches the music I could hear the voices quite well

The voices could be slightly louder, but not so loud as to ruin the eeriness.

Clarity of dialogue/voiceover Use of ambient sound/sound effects to add atmosphere

The chanting was so effective and added atmosphere