Highly detailed observations and great personal definitions of the terms from B & H.

Your explanation notes throughout as to why you made certain choices were also excellent. Lastly, your inclusion of multiple interviews really offered some interesting perspective on what you observed by watching the BGC. More specifically, here are some things that stood out to me:

I liked how you explained why you elaborated on some of the girls from the show and not others--good move on your part. To go a little bit more above and beyond these guidelines, I would suggest including pictures or perhaps create a short slideshow of photos for the observations. Your observations were fantastic and really engaging, but I kept finding myself as a reader thinking "what do these women look like" or "I would like to have seen a picture of of that scene." You may also consider providing some YouTube links to specific points of action that really stood out to you as a viewer.