TITLE OF LESSON: Found Poem Mini-Lesson/ Lit Circle Group Activity on the novel I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings by Maya Angelou. CURRICULUM AREA & GRADE LEVEL: College Prep English / 10th grade DATE OF LESSON:2/20/2014 CA CONTENT STANDARD(S) Common Core: Writing.10.4: Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization,and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience (Found Poem Lesson). Common Core: Speaking & Listening: SL.10.1: Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 6 topics, texts, and issues, building on others ideas and expressing their own clearly (Lit Circle Groups). 1. Come to discussions prepared, having read or studied required material; explicitly draw on that preparation by referring to evidence on the topic, text, or issue to probe and reflect on ideas under discussion. 2. Follow rules for collegial discussions, set specific goals and deadlines, and define individual roles as needed. 3. Pose and respond to specific questions with elaboration and detail by making comments that contribute to the topic, text, or issue under discussion. 4. Review the key ideas expressed and demonstrate understanding of multiple perspectives through reflection and paraphrasing. CA ELD STANDARD(S) Bridging 4. Adapting language choices Adjust language choices according to the task (e.g., group presentation of research project), context (e.g., classroom, community), purpose (e.g., to persuade, to provide arguments or counter arguments), and audience (e.g., peers, teachers, college recruiter) (Found Poem Lesson).
1. Exchanging information/ideas Contribute to class, group, and partner discussions, sustaining conversations on a variety of age and grade appropriate academic topics by following turn taking rules, asking and answering relevant, on topic questions, affirming others, and providing coherent and well articulated comments and additional information (Lit Circle Groups).
BIG IDEA ADDRESSED/ENDURING UNDERSTANDING: The purpose of the found poem lesson is to introduce poetry into the unit and to begin familiarizing students with the literary concepts of tone, voice, diction, and syntax and how these things contribute to establishing a theme. ESSENTIAL QUESTIONS What is tone? How can we create tone? What is voice? How do we establish voice in a poem? How do tone, voice, diction and syntax help to establish a theme? OBJECTIVE(S) OR LEARNING GOAL(S) - choose one After a step by step poetry lesson using the found poem format, students will be able to explain how tone, voice, diction, and syntax help establish a poems theme by creating a found poem on the topic of love and reflecting on the process by answering a prompted question in their playbooks (writing journals). Cognitive Affective
ASSESSMENT(S) - choose one Summative - evaluative Students will be assessed by their finished poem and their journal reflections. The finished poem must (have): 12 lines. Name Title in quotations. Use of at least 4 text based sources. Reflects the topic/theme of love. Their playbook reflections must answer this prompt: Read over your finished poem and answer the following questions in your playbooks. What was your theme? How did diction (word choice) help create your theme? How did syntax (sentence/line structure) help you create your theme? What kind of voice does your poem have? is it the voice of a person? What kind of person? Young, old, male, female, student, teacher, mother, child, etc Taking into account your choice of diction, syntax, and voice what kind of tone is your poem? Examples: Angry, giddy, happy, sad, loving, nave, playful, mocking, serious, silly, sarcastic, sweet, thoughtful, whimsical, uncertain, fearful, dreamy. PREDICTION OF LIKELY DIFFICULTIES STUDENTS MAY ENCOUNTER WITH THIS MATERIAL - I predict that students will be reluctant to make their own poetry. I plan to work past this reluctance by breaking the lesson down into smaller more manageable parts this also is to help my special ed students whose IEPs ask that they have lesson broken down into smaller sections to aid in their issues focusing. Mr. Livingstone and myself will also be roaming the class after each step to help encourage and assist students as needed.
INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES: What the teacher does Anticipatory Set (Into) (30 min) The anticipatory set for this lesson was presented to students on Valentines Day 2/14/14. I showed a prezi presentation on love poetry. It featured poetry by E.E. Cummings and a teen poet published online named Jacob Pagen. I modeled a dramatic read of E.E. Cummings poem i carry your heart with me. Then together we discussed Cummings unique use of syntax in the poem. We also discussed the poems tone, voice, and theme. Students recorded their thoughts in their playbooks (writing journals). Afterwards I played a short video of a man doing a dramatic reading of the poem using a different focus of voice and reflecting a different theme of love. The video featured a pleasant older mans voice speaking the poem while video images of his child playing on the beach flashed by. This showed students that some poems sense of tone and voice can change based on the readers particular lens. In this case the lens of a fathers love as opposed to the lens of romantic love. Next I introduced students to the poetry form called found poetry. I gave them a brief explanation of what a found poem is and how it can be created. Then I showed them a student sample of a found poem using the text from the novel To Kill A Mockingbird. I let students know that next week we will be creating our own found poems and exploring the concepts of tone and voice further. Students were instructed to find 4 different love related text based sources to bring to class to use in their found poems. Rationale: I chose the E.E. Cummings poem because of its unique structure and its subjective nature. I also chose it because its shortness and simple language make it a very accessible poem for English Language Learners and Special Needs students. I chose the poem by teen Jacob Pagen so that students could read a poem done by someone their age, someone they can relate to. They were also able to distinguish the difference in voice and tone between both poems. I decided to use the found poem on To Kill AMocking Bird as their found poem example because it was done by someone their age and it is on a subject they are familiar with having read the novel their freshmen year. I choose to present this information through the online program Prezi because the program allows me to create visually stimulating presentations with ease. I decided to have students reflect on the poems in thier playbooks in order to record their learning and thoughts. STUDENT ACTIVITIES: What the students do Anticipatory Set (Into) (30 min) Students listen as I do a dramatic reading of E.E. Cummings poem. They follow along reading the poem presented on the Prezi presentation application on the classroom smartboard. Students write their thoughts and responses down in their playbooks (writing journals). Instruction (20-25 min.) 1. Students take out their poetry sources and reading logs to be checked off as completed. 2. Students listen to instructions on found poetry and watch as I model how to do them and what my thinking is behind the steps. Then students try it themselves. 3. Students follow the steps and carefully re-read the texts they have chosen. They Highlight or underline details, words and phrases that they find particularly powerful, moving, or interesting. On a separate sheet of paper, they make a list of the details, words and phrases they underlined or highlighted. 4. Students listen to instructions for step 2 nd watch as I model how to do them and what my thinking is behind the steps. Then students try it themselves. 5. Students follow the steps and look back over their list and cut out everything that is dull, or unnecessary, or that just doesnt seem right for a poem about love. Then they rearrange the lines in the order they want. They look over the shortened list and think about the tone their details and diction convey. They make any minor changes necessary to create the poem. They change punctuation and make little changes to the words to make them fit together as needed. 6. After I tell them to stop students put their poetry work away and wait for their lit circle group folders. 7. Students look over the scores and decide on how to divide up the points. Then they decided on their roles for the day based on the rotation. Here is a quick view of the roles students have a more detailed description in their folders. Discussion Director-leads discussion. Summarizer- summarizes the reading. Lit luminary- draws attention to key points in the reading. Connector- brings up outside connections to things in the reading. Vocabulary Enricher- find and defines difficult or new words. Illustrator- draw a picture representing an aspect of the reading. Instruction: (20-25 min) 1. I ask students to take out their sources and I go around checking to see who was prepared for class and receives the points for that assignment. Students will also take out their reading logs 1-6 to be checked at this time. Rationale: I need to encourage student preparedness for class so a points incentive was added. 2. I start up the Prezi presentation on how to create a found poem and direct students on how to accomplish the first few steps. Carefully re-read the texts you have chosen.
Highlight or underline details, words and phrases that you find particularly powerful, moving, or interesting. Note especially examples that reflect your loving feelings or loving feelings of the subject.
On a separate sheet of paper, make a list of the details, words and phrases you underlined or highlighted. Remember you need at least 12 lines in your finished product.
I read the instructions and model examples of how to do the first steps and what the thinking is behind them.
For example I will show them a quote Id like to use from J.R.R. Tolkiens Lord of the Rings trilogy.
And he took her in his arms and kissed her under the sunlit sky, and he cared not that they stood high upon the walls in the sight of many.- Return of the King
I show students the above quote and draw their attention to the highlighted or in this case blue font text. I tell students that I chose this quote because I really like Tolkiens work and this quote is from a moment in the book where Aragorn and Arwen are wed and standing in front of the kingdom of Gondor. I know I dont need the detail about them standing high upon the walls so I scratch that out and only use And he took her in his arms and kissed her under the sunlit sky because that line will fit best with my poem.
Rationale: Modeling the thinking process can help students understand how they can approach the topic and instructions.
3. Students are given 5-10 min. for this task. Mr. Livingstone and I walk around the room checking for progress and understanding.
Rationale: By walking the room we can check in with our students, especially our special needs and EL students, and check for understanding and also see if we can provide further support as needed.
4. After students have had time to complete step 1 I return to the front of the room to deliver the instructions and model for step 2.
Look back over your list and cut out everything that is dull, or unnecessary, or that just doesnt seem right for a poem about love. Then rearrange your lines in the order you want.
As you look over the shortened list, think about the tone that the details and diction convey.
8. Students begin working on their assigned jobs. 9. Students begin discussion when ready. 10. Students evaluate the groups success that day, staple their work together, and place it in the folder. Closure (summarize; make meaning of the lesson) Students listen as I remind them of their homework and summarize the days learning. Students answer the essential questions on the board aloud in open class discussion and if there is time note them in their playbooks. Transfer (Beyond) (opportunities to apply the learning) Will occur next day I teach. LEARNING STYLE(S) ADDRESSED Auditory Visual
Model this process by showing example and explaining the thinking behind why I cut what I decided to cut and why I arranged the lines in the order I did. Then I will show examples of tone and explain which tone I thought best fit my poem and why.
Make any minor changes necessary to create your poem. You can change punctuation and make little changes to the words to make them fit together (such as change the tenses, possessives, plurals, and capitalizations).
If you absolutely need to add a word or two to make the poem flow more smoothly, to make sense, to make a point, you may do so. 5. After giving instructions Mr. Livingstone and I will walk around the room checking for progress and understanding. This is probably the farthest we will get in class and I anticipate that we actually will not finish this much in the twenty minute time span. Whatever stage we stop the students at will be where we pick up next class. 6. I tell students to stop working and put their poems away. I explain that we will be continuing the activity next class. Lit Circle Group Discussion (65 min) 7. Mr. Livingstone or myself will pass back the student group folders at this time in preparation for their daily lit circle group discussion work. 8. Mr. Livingstone and I walk around the room checking in with groups while they take a look at last discussions group work scores and decide how they will divide the points up among themselves. Rationale: Students receive a pooled amount of points based on completion of criteria outlined in the lit circle group rubric. Students take the pooled points and divide them up among each group member. Members that did not contribute very much to the groups effort on that day will likely receive a lower amount of points. Those who provide assistance to other group members will likely receive an increased amount of points. But ultimately the scoring is up to them. We use this scoring model because it encourages participation in the group work and discussion and helps develop useful teamworking and leadership skills. 9. Mr. Livingstone and I walk around the class and monitor student progress and understanding of the days group work and discussion. We look over student work and offer suggestions, advice, and praise. We encourage distracted or disruptive students to focus on their groups work and discussion. 10. Mr. Livingstone or myself will ask the vocabulary enrichers to come up to the whiteboard after they finish their work and write their groups total collected vocabulary words on the board. Any words that are repeated are to have check marks next to them instead of writing them out. I model how this works. Rationale:In order to design our vocabulary quiz we need words. The students have been collecting words they found to be difficult or new to them each day in their lit circle groups. We decided to have the students provide us with the words for the quiz by writing their words on the whiteboard. 11. 10 minutes before class ends we instruct students to wrap up their discussions and finish up their discussion notes and reflections and also to assign the next chapters. 12. 5 minutes before class ends we instruct students to staple their work together and place it in their folders. We also remind students to keep up with their reading and reading logs and to bring their poetry work next class. Guided Practice: The guided practice in todays lesson is during the found poem activity. I provide guided instruction and then they go into a time period of independent practice before I interrupt again with the next set of guided instruction. Independent Practice: Students practice independently at points during the found poem activity and also do some independent practice during their lit circle group work before they begin discussion. However they are allowed to get help, advice, and assistance from their group members at any time during lit circle group work. Closure (summarize; make meaning of the lesson) Once students have stapled and put away their group work I will use the remaining minutes in class to summarize the days activities and check if students feel if they have met the goals for the day by seeing if they can answer some of the essential questions for the found poem lesson that are listed on the whiteboard. What is tone? How can we create tone? Transfer (Beyond) (opportunities to apply the learning) The transfer of the found poem lesson will be explained at the end of my next teaching day Wed. February, 26 2014. LEARNING STYLE(S) ADDRESSED: Visual Auditory INFO ABOUT ENGLISH LANGUAGE LEARNERS Readiness level Learning profile: strengths and challenges Interestsacademic and/or personal
Edgar Castellanos- (LEP) Limited English Proficient. Readiness- Standards for this student should be at the bridging level to help him practice and refine his skills so that he can reach full reclassification. Learning profile- Has some issues with grammar rules and spelling but his thoughts are well organized and clearly stated. Interests- Soccer.
Daniel Santiago-(LEP) Limited English Proficient. Readiness- Standards for this student should be at the emerging- bridging levels to help him practice and refine his skills so that he can reach full reclassification. Learning profile- Daniel struggles with grammar, spelling, and writing in a formal style. He is shy at speaking in class but his speaking and listening skills are proficient. Interests- Surfing.
John Torres Cisneros-(LEP) Limited English Proficient. Readiness- Standards for this student should be at the bridging level to help him practice and refine his skills so that he can reach full reclassification. INFO ABOUT STUDENTS W/ SPECIAL NEEDS Readiness level Learning profile: strengths and challenges Interestsacademic and/or personal
Logan Bloch-(Autism) Readiness- Great listening skills, hard worker, not afraid to ask questions. Learning profile- Visual aids like graphic organizers for writing tasks are helpful. Breaking longer tasks into smaller parts is helpful. Needs extra time and alternate site for testing. Interests- Video games and drawing.
Micheal Brewer- (Learning disability) Readiness- Works well in groups. Does his work. Participates. Learning profile- Needs extended time on assignments. Needs to be checked for understanding. Interests- Rock music
Sergio Caro-(Learning disability) Readiness- Often can get off task just needs gentle reminders to refocus. Prefers to work alone. Is uncomfortable with group tasks. Learning profile- Needs extended time on tests and quizzes and alternate testing site. Interests- Skating
Learning profile- John struggles with reading comprehension. He works well in small group situations. He does not have regular access to a computer and therefore prefers written assignments over typed ones. Interests: Soccer.
Adriana Vasquez-(LEP) Limited English Proficient. Readiness- Standards for this student should be at the bridging level to help him practice and refine his skills so that he can reach full reclassification. Learning profile-Prefers to work alone does not like speaking in class. She is a strong writer but needs some support with reading comprehension. Interests: Dance.
Antonio Tony Cruz- (Learning disability) Readiness- Slow learner. Often needs to be checked for understanding. Struggles with reading comprehension and writing formally. Learning profile- Extended time on tests and quizzes plus alternate testing site. Needs preferential seating. Interests- Soccer.
Olivia Dow-(ADD) Readiness- Needs reminders to stay on task. Works best in groups. Works best with no down time. Learning profile- Needs access to alternate testing site and preferential seating arrangements. Interests- Enjoys reading and playing on her phone.
Nick Houts- (Learning disability) Readiness- Process information slowly. Struggles with reading comprehension. Enjoys working in groups. Learning profile- Needs preferential seating, extended time on tests and quizzes and alternate testing site. Interests- Computers and cars.
Taylor Moore-(Learning disibility) Readiness- Good listener is polite. Needs some reminders to stay on task. Gets work done but sometimes needs assistance with clarifying directions. He wont often ask for help so I need to check with him frequently for understanding. Learning profile- Delays in visual processing and memory. Concentration issues. Special grouping is helpful. Needs extended time on tests and quizzes and access to alternate testing site. Interests- Soccer.
Robert Protocollo- (Traumatic brain injury) Readiness- Struggles with working memory. Has major discipline issues. Ive seen him go to class once this whole semester. His case manager is handling the issue. Learning profile- Extended time needed on tests and quizzes. Access to alternate testing site. Needs to be given time to think. Check frequently for understanding. Interests- Dont know much about him but I see him skating outside of school so I guess maybe skating.
Sabrina Ramirez- (Learning disability) Readiness- Easily gets distracted. Less down time the better with her. Works well in groups. Learning profile- Extended time on tests and quizzes, alternate testing site, preferential seating, and check for understanding. Interests- Soccer and art.
Silver Sanchez- (ADHD) Readiness- Enjoys working in groups. Gets her work done. Does quality work. Seems to enjoy the class. I havent noticed any attention or learning issues with her so far. Learning profile- Needs alternate testing site. Interests- Rock music and playing video games.
Daniel Santiago- (Learning disability) Readiness: He is a hard worker and works well in group settings. When asked to do independent work he goes to the back of the room where our special ed aide is available to help any students with need. Learning profile- Needs extended time on tests and quizzes, alternate testing site, preferential seating, checks for understanding, and longer tasks need to be broken into smaller ones. Interests-Soccer.
Cole Terrill-(Learning Disibility) Readiness- Works well in groups. Stays on task. Does his work well. I havent noticed any issues with Cole so far. Learning profile- Extended time on tests and quizzes, alternate testing site, checks for understanding. Interests- Skating
DIFFERENTIATION FOR ENGLISH LANGUAGE LEARNERS choose area(s) as necessary based on information above Content - what material - including key vocabulary - is learned Process - how the material is learned Product - how the learning is demonstrated
Content-Key vocabulary for this lesson is the word tone.
Process- Material is learned through a step by step process with frequent opportunities for one on one assistance by myself or Mr. Livingstone.
Product- The learning is demonstrated through progress made in the step by step process and completion of their poems.
DIFFERENTIATION FOR STUDENTS WITH SPECIAL NEEDS choose area(s) as necessary based on information above
Content - what material - including key vocabulary - is learned Process - how the material is learned Product - how the learning is demonstrated
Content-Key vocabulary for this lesson is the word tone.
Process- Material is learned through a step by step process with frequent opportunities for one on one assistance by myself or Mr. Livingstone.
Product- The learning is demonstrated through progress made in the step by step process and completion of their poems.
RESOURCES: Valentines Day Poem Introductory Prezi Presentation Found Poem Lesson Prezi Presentation
REFLECTION:
Although about ten students were not prepared with their sources to do the found poem lesson we were able to work around that and have them participate. Students without their own sources were allowed to find some quickly on their smart devices or utilize the two computers in the back of the room. They also had access to large literature texts to use for the activity. Once students started working with their sources I was pleased to see many of them engaging in the activity and discussing it actively with fellow students at their tables. I anticipated that this activity could be a bit challenging for some of my students and after the initial instruction and modeling I made sure to stop and work with each of them individually to check for understanding. I was pleased to see them all engaging well with the creative activity.
At the end of the class I had some students far ahead in the activity beyond what I expected and some students behind what I expected however not one student had nothing. At the end of class every student had some amount of work completed on their poem. Next class I will provide something for the completed students to work on while I work with other students who will need some extra assistance catching up.
Next time I teach this lesson I will provide a sampling of pre-printed sources for students who are not prepared with their own sources to readily work with so that they dont waste as much time looking up workable sources in class and can begin the activity earlier.