Grammar and punctuation Excessive amount of incorrect or grammatical errors. Various incorrect or grammatical errors. Little, minor punctuation and grammatical errors. No Grammar and punctuation errors.
9/11 Description Little to no description of the events that took place. Includes descriptions, disorganized, incorrect sequence of events Includes description with little missing events. Covers all the events with vivid and detailed descriptions.
Farewell Little to No farewell included Address final farewell briefly with little to no emotional ties. Addresses farewell with good descriptions and some emotional ties includes why they took certain actions Addresses farewell with great description and includes great emotional ties with the final farewell
Bibliography No bibliography included. Bibliography included but very limited. Not all sources listed Bibliography included with little sources missing. Bibliography included with all sources listed