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Full name: V Th Nga . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Course title: . . . . . .

Class: 13E5. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Version: 1 . . . . . . . . .
WRITING PORTFOLIO
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Topic: Write a paragraph to report the results of a survey about changing family. . . . . . . . .
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My essay:
The aim of this report is to outline the results of a survey
which was carried out to assess the changing trend of the various
family types of families in the UK. The compared staistic was taken
from year 1996 and year 2012. It appears that on the whole, the
number of families in each type in 2012 increases, comparing with
that in 1996; exept the married or civil partner couple with
dependent children decreases in number since 1996. The most
significant rise is the number of cohabiting couple family, which is as
twice as that in 1996. However, despite an increse in cohabiting
couple families and lone parent families over the last decade, married
couple are still the most common family type in the UK, both with and
without dependent children. All points considered, a slight change in
the number of families in each family type has been made over a
decade.
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