Full name: Bi Thin Sao PARAGRAPH WRITING

Group: QH10.E4 Unit 8: Description paragraphs

Semester 1 Year 2 - 2011 Page:.

PARAGRAPH WRITING
(Version 3)
Topic: Describe the room in your house that you like the most.
Outline:
TS: My most favorite room is my fathers working one with stuffs arranged neatly inside.
SIs: Stuffs from left to right:
- SI 1: Bookshelf: + shelf
+ book
- SI 2: Desk: + computer
+ lamp
+ materials
- SI 3: Couch: + couch
+ pillows
+ vase of roses
- SI 4: Window: +curtain
+ view
+ flowerpot of daisy
CS: No feeling is greater than lying on the couch with a romantic novel, enjoying the
coziness while it is raining outside.
Paragraph:
On the second floor backwards my house is my most favorite room, also my fathers
working one. This small room has stuffs arranged neatly inside. On the left side of the
room stands a huge six-level wooden shelf on which books are classified distinguishably
according to their kinds. In front of the bookshelf is a rectangle beige desk where my
father sits almost all the time I come in. On the desk, a computer is arranged next to a
lamp usually giving out cozy, soft yellow light. There is a high chance of finding on my
Full name: Bi Thin Sao PARAGRAPH WRITING
Group: QH10.E4 Unit 8: Description paragraphs
Semester 1 Year 2 - 2011 Page:.

fathers desk the materials of which the subjects are related to psychology as his major.
Lying on the right side of the room is a two-meter cream couch with three dark-colored
pillows. My mother often lays a vase full of red or yellow roses on a round small table next
to the couch. On the back wall of the room, a glass window with a cream curtain looks
over a green dome of trees outside. Hanging outstandingly at the window is a pretty
flowerpot with year-round purple daisies. My farther like standing there, enjoying
quietness and the fresh filled-with-flowery-scent air. However, for me, no feeling is greater
than lying on the couch with a romantic novel, enjoying the coziness while it is raining
outside.
Word count: 220