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In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, in other countries
they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should
children have to follow rules?


Freedom plays a mandatory role in everybodys life. We can see in todays
modernized era nobody likes to get some restrictions upon them, whether it would be
a child or an adult. Some people think that there should have some strict rules of
behaviour for children, but I disagree with this statement.

Wherever it is a reality that sometimes more restrictions can cause more frustration in
children, which leads to many other mental diseases as well.Morever they can be,
behave like a stubborn .Sometimes they feel themselves under pressure, which can be
a main reason, for their poor performance in their field. In some cases children would
be crazier to do these things from where well try to keep them away.

In other words() we have to look for other aspects as well, like if we usually ignore
our childrens bad habits, then they cant be good human beings in their future life.
Moreover() if we never draw attention upon the childrens main activities then they
may be acquiring bad company. They can know regarding the value of respect for
their elders.Theycan knows the importance of relationships .They can know regarding
their cultural values as well.

In a nutshell, I would like to say that children should be teach regarding the value of
their customs, rituals and respect towards their elders for their future life, but most of
the extra restriction should be being avoided. It would be better to make them good
human beings in their coming future.

A good essay, set out well. Nicely done.


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Comment: unnecessary. It is a
reality.
Comment: Unnecessary mental
diseases.
Comment: like a stubborn a stubborn
what?
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Comment: must understand
Comment: They need to understand
the importance of relationships and their
cultural values as well
Comment: taught
Comment: be avoided
Comment: It would be better for
helping them to be good human beings in
the future.