o Weather o The sky was clear and blue the morning I lost my book. o It was raining so hard that I was afraid to step out of the door. o The snow was piled up so high against the front door that we almost couldnt get out to shovel that day. o Dialogue o Stop it! I screamed as I pulled my hand away from my little brother, Sam. o Where are we going, Mama? I asked as we all got into the car. o Action o I slowly opened the door to my room and walked in. o I ran, and ran, and ran, throwing my kite as high as I could into the air. o BRRRRRING! BRRRRRRRRIIIIIIINNNNG! I woke up to the sound of my alarm screaming at me. 2. Show, Now Tell o I walked slowly, slowly, slowly down the hall toward the classroom. I was biting my lip and gripping my moms hand very hard. What would it be like? (This shows that the character is nervous by what she does, but does not say she was nervous.) 3. Dialogue (Characters Talking) o Are we going to the party? I asked. o Im not feeling very well, Todd whispered. o That one is mine! Abby cried, as loud as she could. 4. ALL CAPITALS (Use this to have the readers say it loudly or know that it is very important) o HELP! she screamed. o It was the most BEAUTIFUL thing he had every seen. o The cake was HUGE and had GIGANTIC candles. o YIKES! What is that sound? 5. Exclamation Points (Shout marks!!! Readers will see they should shout this sentence or say it with great strength) o Stop!!! o My little brother is the most annoying baby! o It was the very BEST day of my whole life!!! o Get out of the way!!! I screamed as my bike flew toward the crowd of kids. I cant stop!!! 6. Ellipses () (Tells the reader to pause at this spot. This builds tension) o I opened the box. The lid screeched as I lifted it slowly. Then o There were loud, crashing footsteps coming down the hall. Then the doorknob began to turn 7. D-A-S-H-E-S (Tells the reader to s- t-r-e-t-c-h out the word when it is read) o N-I-C-K-Y, N-I-C-K-Y!!! Where are you? o I w-a-l-k-e-d as s-l-o-w-l-y as I could. If I went s- l-o-w-l-y maybe I would be too late. o Y-A-H-O-O!!! No homework tonight! I shouted. 8. Sensory Details Using the 5 Senses: o Sight o Hearing o Taste o Touch / Feeling o Smell o The icy rain felt like tiny needles as it fell on my cold skin. As it hit the sidewalk, I could hear a tink, tink, tink sound. o The pizza was gooey and cheesy. As I took a big bite, the cheese stretched out in tasty, delicious strings of goodness. o As I worked in the garden, I smelled the sweet scents of all the lovely flowers. They reminded me of the big box of Crayolas. There were fiery golden yellow ones, soft rosy pink ones, bright, blood red ones, and plain and simple white one that looked like a clean puffy cloud in the sky. 9. Internal Thinking (This shows what the character is saying to him/herself inside his/her head) o I was thinking, how can this be happening to me? I know I put that homework in my backpack. o Where was my mother? She said she would pick me up. Did she forget me? I kept thinking about what I should do next. 10. Good Ending o I learned that even little kids can make a difference. o That was the most fun I ever had playing with my little brother. o My parents and I laughed and laughed. What a great day!