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IMPRISONED

BY SARA ANANDJI











ANANDJI.SARA@GMAIL.CO.UK
16 NETLEY AVENUE, ILFORD
IG27NF
07568392764


BLACK SCREEN

Gun shot fired

DISSOLVE TO:

EXT- FOREST- AFTERNOON

DANIEL (21) dark haired, Asian, and brother of MAYA (14) Fair
skin, brunette, is holding the gun at ELLIOT (28) Black, shirt
covered in blood, who is on the ground grabbing his arm in
agonising pain as he has just been shot. DANIEL is continuing
to hold the gun at ELLIOT throughout the scene; however,
DANEILS hand is shaking as he is nervous about what he is
wanting to do, which is kill ELLIOT. DANIEL is only showing
anger throughout the scene and his is fuming about ELLIOT
finding out that he has killed his sister MAYA.

BIRDS BLARING

ELLIOT:
ARGHHHHHHH

DANIEL:
YOU KILLED HER!!!!
YOU killed my little sister. You think that I am just going to
shoot you but let you stay alive?

ELLIOT:
I killed her and I left her body to die in that lake right
behind you.

DANIEL:
You think its okay to hurt these girls?!
I am going to make the rest of your short life a living hell.

ELLIOT:
You shouldnt have left your poor sister all alone by herself
in your big beautiful house.

DANIEL dashes the gun around ELLIOTS head.

EXT- PARK- AFTERNOON

1 week before...

ELLIOT is sitting on a bench in the park. He is watching all
the other children and youths play. ELLIOT gets up and starts
walking away.

DISSOLVE TO:

EXT- STREETS- AFTERNOON

ELLIOT is walking down the streets after being at the park.
While he is walking he checks out other females that walk
past. His intentions are shown through his reactions of other
females walking past or who around him. ELLIOT then finds
himself on MAYAs street. MAYAS door to the front of her
house is not fully shut. ELLIOT finds his opportunity to go
for it and to look.

DISSOLVE TO:

INT- MAYAS HOUSE- AFTERNOON

ELLIOT creeps into the house. During this time, MAYA is
sleeping in her room. ELLIOT move stealthily around the house
to not make a sound to be caught. He looks around the bottom
floor and to find that no one is around, he makes his way
upstairs. He creeps around and finds MAYA in her bed. He
stands by her door watching her. ELLIOT then makes his way
into MAYAS room to approach her. He slowly reaches her
shoulder, which then MAYA wakes up in a ghastly shock.

END SCENE

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