Evaluate each grant according to the New York State Nutrition Council Special Projects Funds directions and complete this orm! Provide eed"ack and grade each category or each o the three grants! #and it in via $$! Use this document and type your score and comments in each box. I am looking for good critical thinking, specific details and rationale for your score. Your feedback should be specific enough that the grant seeker will be able to determine why they received the assigned score. Category Jenny XX Grant 1 SNACC Score Comments Clear goal % measurea"le o"jectives &' pts () *No measura"le o"jectives *Some o the o"jectives are written more similarly to goals or activities *+he purpose doesn,t speciy or individual elderly needs -eined need (' pts . */acks inormation why it is needed in the speciic community *-oesn,t give statistics */acks "ackground inormation a"out the pro"lem and how that aects the aging population *0hat already e1ists2 *0hat is the pro"lem2 -eined target audience (' pts 3 *4t doesn,t speciy how many people will "e aected */acks detail in 5what is appropriate or age "racket6 *-oesn,t speciy who is the target starting audience that will irst "e reached "y the program Colla"oration (' pts . *Says that she has "een working or /oretto7 "ut does not ela"orate on what /oretto is */acks inormation a"out +anya #oracek and her responsi"ilities in the project *-oesn,t speciy what department o Syracuse 8niversity will "e overseeing the project and what their role will "e *No letter attached rom colla"orators Enhancement o one or more o the initiatives listed on page ( (' pts . *+imeline could "e more detailed and "roken down *E1empliies parts o the we"site that have already "een developed *Shows resources used 9we"site: and developed 9newsletter: *-oesn,t pinpoint any o the speciic initiatives on the guidelines *$rings up nutrition "ut doesn,t tie it to the unding o"jectives 9"road: Evaluation plan )' pts &; *-oesn,t speciy how many people responded rom the health air *4ncluded an e1ample o a survey tool to evaluate how eective the we"site is *<ade a pilot newsletter *-idn,t address any limitations or challenges *-idn,t address the use o this we"site on a "roader scale outside the realms o her project *-idn,t do a pretest and post*test survey on the eiciency o the we"site *+racks the amount o users on the we"site which is good to see how popular it is and how many people it is reaching =ealistic "udget (' pts 3 *4ndicates what the money will "e used or *$roke it down "y per hour rate7 cents7 and detailed monetary values including timing and how much la"or will "e involved *0ho will she "e paying to do the la"or hours and why >('?hour2 *0here is the price or the update coming rom2 #ow did she get this num"er2 * 0hy .' homes or newsletter2 #ow did she get this num"er2 Total Score 100 pts 68 Category Sandy XXXX Grant 2 Improving Ntrition !dcation in Jvenile "ia#etes Camp Score Comments Clear goal % measurea"le o"jectives &' pts (3 *#as measura"le o"jectives using percentages o how many people will "eneit *States goals clearly in a"stract "ut does not reiterate goal in the main part o the proposal -eined need (' pts (' *4dentiies the pro"lem in the community *8ses statistics to reinorce the importance o the pro"lem and cites sources *4dentiies what is lacking and why children don,t have the knowledge *@ddresses the need ater working with these children "eore and realiAing the knowledge they had "een lacking *E1plains who and why there is a need7 and in what community -eined target audience (' pts 3 *8ses a very small target audience *E1planation needed or the siAe o sample *4n this section7 ails to mention i the target audience is kids attending the /ions Camp #ickory or kids outside o the camp Colla"oration (' pts 3 */ists colla"orators and their roles and responsi"ilities in the project *No letter indicating colla"oration attached to the proposal Enhancement o one or more o the initiatives listed on page ( (' pts B *-irectly addresses o"jectives ( and & on guidelines or unding *-escri"es each activity in detail and e1plains "oth the purpose and outcome o the learning o"jective *Speciying activities that are geared towards the target audienceC"oth interactive and age appropriate *8ses a variety o activities to get the point across *E1plains when the activities will "e planned and ready "y */acks a speciic timeline with dates Evaluation plan )' pts &B *E1plains when the activities will "e planned and ready "y and will do a ormal pilot test or evaluation *Pilot test will look at previous year,s activities and how "eneicial they were to the children *0ill provide a pretest and post*test to children and then evaluate areas that need improvement *0ill allow or children to apply what they have learned "y iguring out car"ohydrate e1changes and posting signs or the other children to see *Could have included a chart to show how evaluation would directly link to measura"le o"jectives 9this would enhance the evaluation plan: =ealistic "udget (' pts (' *EDuipment and rent already availa"le to them "y the camp *Cost eective with the use o volunteers *4ncludes an e1planation o each e1pense and what their uses will "e contri"uting to Total Score 100 pts $2 Category Ally XXXXX Grant % &'at(s on yor plate) Score Comments Clear goal % measurea"le o"jectives &' pts (& *Goals are appropriate "ut there may "e conusion "etween goals and o"jectives *States "oth short term and long term goals *E"jectives are not listed and not measura"le -eined need (' pts F *Clearly addresses what the pro"lem is "y using powerul statistics showing the prevalence o o"esity in our country *-oes not cite statistics or where num"ers are coming rom *E1plains the need on a much larger scale "ut not speciic to the community -eined target audience (' pts 3 *4ncludes all possi"le people who will "eneit rom the program *-oesn,t speciy the community in which these kids will come rom *Fails to mention that the kids attend 0ellwood <iddle School *-oesn,t speciy gender or demographic *-oesn,t include the num"er o children participating Colla"oration (' pts B *Gery detailed e1planation o each colla"orator,s roles and responsi"ilies *<oney has already "een contri"uted "y the colla"orators to start the program and pilot test *@dditionally money will "e donated "y colla"orators7 such as 0egmans */acks a letter indicating colla"oration *Good that nutrition students will "e participating in order to "ring knowledgea"le and relata"le people to the program Enhancement o one or more o the initiatives listed on page ( (' pts (' *-irectly links to the & nd o"jective on the unding guidelines *Chart enhances the timeline *-etailed accounts o activities and how the program will play out *-escri"es each monthly challenge and presentations that will address relevant health topics which are already outlined *Gives speciic timing or each monthly challenge with a realistic "reakdown o the low o the hour activity *Provides timeline with tentative chosen oods or each month *Each kid will have the opportunity to make the recipe themselves *@ter the activity7 time is provided or kids to talk a"out their accomplishments or personal e1periences at home Evaluation plan )' pts )' *@llows the children to rate the ood ater they have tasted it and complete a card so that nutrition students can document *8ses a pre assessment survey "eore the challenges "egin *=uns a pilot test to measure student receptiveness and then a post survey to assess the pilot test *Provides inormation a"out a pilot test that was already completed and evaluated to see where there may "e limitations or challenges *=ealiAes that time may "e a limitation and that goals may not "e short term *-oesn,t just plan on targeting the students at 0ellwood <iddle School "ut hopes to provide outreach to other schools in Enondaga County =ealistic "udget (' pts H *Not realistic that teachers will not receive e1tra salary or working e1tra time *4s the teacher salary or time ater school hours covered "y other sources2 *#elpul that eDuipment and supplies are already provided "y the schoolC "ut how many2 *-oesn,t give estimates o how many materials are needed7 where they will "e purchased rom7 and what the "reakdown o costs are 9e1I why are C-,s or music >.'2: *8nrealistic prices or materials 9very overestimated in some e1penses and underestimated in others: *-oesn,t include what ood will "e purchased**>.'' seems like a lotC how many kids will "e participating2 Total Score 100 pts 82