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CARPENTER
By
Rikhel Trivedi

Email: Rikhel@hotmail.co.uk
Phone Number: 07961477720
Address: 15 Spencer Road, Ilford, Essex, IG3 8PW

FADE IN

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INT: LADIES TOILETS - EVENING

LUCY (16) dressed in school

walks to the sink and turns
LUCY looks at the mirror and
ladies toilets making her way

uniform, comes out the toilet and

the taps on and washes her hands.
does her hair, she then exits the
out the corridor.

Mid-Shot

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INT: CORRIDOR EVENING

LUCY walks out to the corridor and looks right as she turns left
making her way to the exit. As she walks towards the end of the
corridor.
Wide angled shot

CARPENTER (30s), waits for LUCY to turn right of the corridor,

as she comes he snatches LUCY from by her mouth.
Wide angled shot

INT: OUTSIDE WORKSHOP EVENING

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Close up

The CARPENTER (30s) tall figure and dressed in blue overalls,

he puts on a mask and takes out gloves from his overalls pockets
and wears them. He then looks and opens the door as he enters
the workshop.
Close up of boots

Close up

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INT: WORKSHOP EVENING

Long shot

The CARPENTER walks and stops in front of unconscious Caucasian

girl lying on the floor and glares at her.

High Angled

Close up

LUCY (16) is lying on the floor groggy, her eyes open slowly as
she gains conscious, she sees a tall silhouette figure and
immediately begins to panics as she struggles to move as her
hands and legs are tied together to the worktop and screams

Close up

LUCY
(Screams)
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Long shot

As

POV

LUCY

continues

to

struggle

with

the

ropes

tied

on

her.

The CARPENTER stands and watches LUCY scream and struggle. He

then walks to the worktop and stares at all the tools lied on
the table. The CARPENTER looks at the metal hammer and then
lifts the metal hammer and checks how heavy it is and places it
back down, he then moves his hand further down and picks up the
wooden mallet and plays with it in his hands.
Close up

LUCY carries to scream as she sees the CARPENTER pick up

different types of tools and testing them in his hands. LUCY
continues to struggle to move but fails as she has been tied to
the workshop.
Mid-Shot

Close up

The CARPENTER then walks up to LUCY making sure he sees her

clearly and stops and glares at LUCY and breathes in heavily.
LUCY panics and tries to break out of the ropes tied round her
as she sees the wooden mallet in the CARPENTERs hands she then
rapidly struggles and screams
LUCY
Extreme close up

Close up

(Screams)
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!

Long shot

Mid-Shot

Long shot

The CARPENTER walks up to right in front of LUCY and begins to

strike the mallet across to LUCYs ribs. The CARPENTER then
stops and stares at LUCY and walks back to the worktop and
places the wooden mallet back to its position and walks back to
LUCY and unties the ropes and watches her drop to the floor.
FADE OUT
Word Count: 475

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