5

Would
yes
you watch
it

yes

yes

yes

no

yes

yes

no

no

What do
you like
about the
story?
Are the
titles
clear:

Unique

unique

Good
unique
storyline

Cool
A lot of
narrative suspense

A lot of
thought
went
into it
5/ yes

Good
ideas

On the
run/
hunted
aspect
3

Show
typography
of the
titles
3

Chase
scene
too
generic
3

Communication More
to the audience exciting
name

Show
Too
your
clich
audience

Do you like
the name:
Out of 5

What
Show
should be typography
improved? of the
titles
Rate the
3
film out of
5*s

Show
typography
of the
titles
3
4

Feedback on our Film from our Pitch

I think our film pitch went well because we got a good score for our first pitch and most people liked our ideas. We had an average name rating of 4 which is really
good as most people understood our thought behind the name and what it represented within the narrative. Almost everyone wanted to watch it which is
obviously good; those who did not said it was because it wasnt their type of film. We got good feedback on our actual plot idea, saying its unique and
suspenseful. We also got a 4 for how clear are the titles, which are good as we know that our ideas could work. Overall we had a score of 3 out of 5*s for the film
which means our film is good but we have to work on improving the titles and such. I think the thing we need to improve the most to make it suit the audience
would be making sure our typography suits the genre well enough.