Focus

Range of Shot Types and Editing

Transitions

Comments
Good range of transitions and shots that
compliment each other and the simplistic
effect works well.

Targets
The conversation between the two
characters could use shot reverse shot
cleared as not many shots are over
shoulder.

Appropriate pace and content for

genre
Position and order of titles

The shots keep in time with the music

well.
The titles are positioned perfectly and fit
very well into the shot.
The protagonist is recognized easily.

Lengthen some of the shots to correlate

the genre convention pace.
The titles need to last longer they are too
fast to read at times.
Your drawing doesnt show the
difference between the two girls very
well.

Raises enigma codes, as the protagonist

obviously is unhappy.
Conventions met as not much happens
in the two minutes.
The music sets the atmosphere instantly
and it effective as it suggests the
storyline.

Suggest what could happen, make

hints?

Introduction of characters

Introduction of storyline
Clearly an opening sequence
Use of sound

The song being continued later on is

confusing and you could just lower the
volume and have it playing throughout
rather than having it stop and start.