Name: Issey poole

TASK

COMMENT

T+/T-

A01-Develop

The project does demonstrate development but at present there is not

enough of it. Each development needs to be linked to an artist. For example
when you are looking at dirty London you could look at the downturn work
of james Clarke. Artist and me sections are a good way to do this. Also
where you make a significant leap add a visual mind map showing where
you have come from and where you intend to go.
Other Markets that could be visited
Billingsgate fish
Spitalfields
Columbia Road

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A02-Refine

You refine by returning to a place on a number of occasion. The market

idea is great and the smithfield shots are strong. However you need to go to
more places and try and capture as many parts of the place as you can.
Then after reviewing go back and work on what was successful. Sounds
and objects from the market add to the overall picture of the market

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A03-Record

You visual recording is good but a lot more is needed, however your
anitation needs to be more in depth. You must analyse your own work as
well as the photographs of other photographers

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A04-Present
WAG: C TARGET GRADE: B
Comment

Issy there are some good ideas here but you must start producing more
shoots by the end of the unit you should have a minimum of 10 shoots
(responses) that show development / refinement all backed up with Artist
research. Please read the comment above and go back over your work
making changes where needed.