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Free write 11/6/14

If I had another 24 hours to work on my ethnography I would have


I would have checked for more grammar errors
Added more details
Made the flow a bit better
Be more descriptive
Add more background information
Checked to see if I was using the correct tenses throughout
Added more detail in which the coaches were interacting with each other and
how they felt toward each other and the team
Triple proofed my work
Elaborated more on some details

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