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WrittenbyEfrenAlmanza
AlejandraTrevizo
English1312
P,JayViera
UniversityofTexasatElPaso
11/17/2014
DRAFT#1

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TITLE

SCENE

VIDEO

FX

AUDIO

Introductionofdonhaskins
basketballcourt(BlackNWhite)

imagesofmensfootballaudience basedontheaudiencemorepeople
andvolleyballaudience
knowaboutthemenssportsthanthe
womensfromthewaypromotethem

interviewofsoftballcoach

questionsaboutequality interviewaudio/howdoyoufeelabout
betweentheathletics
menandwomen'sathleticsdoyoufeel
theyarerepresentedequally?whyorwhy
not?

footballplayerinterview

questionsonathletics

interview/howdoyoufeelthatthereare
morewomensportsthantherearefor
men?

basketballaudienceofboth
womanandmensgames.

fadingphotos

music/narrationbasedontheaudience
fromthemensgameitisshownthatthey
arepromotedmuchmorethanthewoman's
becausetheaudiencewasmuchbigger
thanforthewomen's

interviewaudio/doyoufeelbothmens
andwomensathleticsarepromoted
equallyorarethemenssportspromoted
muchbetterthanthewoman's?

menandwomendidnot
haveequalrightsgoing

softmusic

studentsinterview

history

title9fades,equality
betweenmenandwomen
athletics

musicinbackground/narrationaremens
andwomensathleticsrepresentedequally
whencomparingtheboth?
fadesout

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toschoolwomenwere
meanttostayhomewell
mencouldattendschool

utep/texaswestern

informationoneducation narrations/thelmawhitewasdeniedat
thelmawhitedeniedto
texaswestern/utepbecauseshewasa
enterutepbecauseshe
femaleandafricanamerican
isawoman

interviewwithwomen'sstudies
professor

interviewofprofessor

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importanceoftitle9

whattitle9didfor
basedoninformationtitle9gavethe
womenintheeducational equalopportunitytobothmenandwomen
system
inschools.

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differences

youareabletoregister
forathleticgames
althoughnotallofthe
women'sgamesarelisted
becausetheyputthe
gamewiththemens

narrator/basedontheaudiencesand
representationthemen'sgamesare
representedmuchhighertogetthe
attentionoftheaudiencetogo

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http://utepsportslottery.utep.edu/
student/TicketLottery/welcome.p
hp

calltoaction
registrationforgames
orpurchasebuttonfrom
women'sstudies

Statingthecalltoactionsby
explainingwhattodoandhowtodoit
suchasregisteringforgamesstepby
step,wheretopurchasewomensbutton
withdirections

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credits

credits

music

interviewaudio/doyoufeelmenand
womangetanequalopportunityinthe
educationalsystem?whyorwhynot?

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Vasquez,S.(2009,January1).EqualOpportunityTitleIX.

Jastor

RetrievedOctober20,2014,from

Earticlenewspaper

Ejournals

http://admin.utep.edu/default.aspx?tabid=68750

Carpenter,L.(2014,April9).AcostaCarpenterresearch
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EXAMPLEFILM

SCENE
1

0:10

VIDEO

FadeuponMining
Mindspicaxeatdawn

FX

AUDIO

Music:UTEPfightsong

Video:UTEPatdawn,
sunlightglimmering
offMiningMindspick.
2

0:15

Xfadetostudents
Title:UTEPOntheMove Musiccontinuesthenunder.
movingatafastpace
Narrator:[VO]ThepaceoflifeatUTEP
throughcampus
seemstoincreasewitheachsemester,as
Video:Timelapse
eachyearmorestudentsenrollatthe
videoofstudentsshot
university.
fromStudentUnion

0:10

Cuttoshotof
constructionwork

0:10

CuttoNarrator

standinginfrontof
theGeological
Sciencesbuildingwith
constructionin
background

Musicfadesout
Narrator:Since1980,severalnew
buildingshavebeenaddedtotheover
400acresofcampus,withevenmorenew
buildingsinthepipelinetoaddress
skyrocketingenrollment.
Narrator:[tocamera]Butthis
constructionisbynomeanscertain.
UnlessthelegislatureoftheStateof
Texasapprovesthefundingforthesenew
buildings,UTEPwillnothaveenough
classroomstomeetfuturegrowth.

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0:45

CuttoDr.Natalicio
inheroffice.

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Title:DianaNatalicio, Narrator:[VO]Presidentofthe
PresidentofUTElPaso UniversityofTexasatElPaso,Diana
Natalicio,stressedtheimportanceof
thelegislaturepassingthebills.
Pres.Nataliciointerview(0:30)