Name: TC

1.1 Discover and explore- Plans and drafts written assignments.

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3.3 Organize, record and evaluate- Writes logically and coherently for varied purposes

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4.2 Attend to Conventions- Grammar and Spelling

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4.3 Present and Share- Select and present key ideas or information using print, media and/or visuals

Comments: Good work T, I can see the effort you put into your autobiography. I enjoyed your top ten
favourite things list and learning about your family. Make sure to always edit for spelling, punctuation and
content before handing in your final copy.

Name: GH
1.1 Discover and explore- Plans and drafts written assignments.

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3.3 Organize, record and evaluate- Writes logically and coherently for varied purposes

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4.2 Attend to Conventions- Grammar and Spelling

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4.3 Present and Share- Select and present key ideas or information using print, media and/or visuals

Comments: Awesome Job G. You gave me great depth in your content and you had very creative chapter
headings. Your editing was apparent between your first and second drafts. Keep up the good work.
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I love Anne of Green Gables too. It is such an interesting story that was based on actual events of
Canadian history.

Name: TR
1.1 Discover and explore- Plans and drafts written assignments.

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3.3 Organize, record and evaluate- Writes logically and coherently for varied purposes

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4.2 Attend to Conventions- Grammar and Spelling

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4.3 Present and Share- Select and present key ideas or information using print, media and/or visuals

Comments: Great work T, I enjoyed the amount of creativity and fun you incorporated into your
autobiography. You had a few spelling and punctuation mistakes here and there but overall it was
fantastic effort. Keep up the good work.