2.

BODY
Topic Sentence- Choosy job seekers
Supporting Details-Candidates are expecting job offer with a
package.
-They expect a high pay, convenient working location, no extra
shift, near from home etc.
-example: not willing to drive a distance from home to officetoo stress to handle traffic congestion.
Concluding Sentence As mention above, Choosy job seekers is
one of the many causes of unemployment amiong graduates,

3.BODY
Topic Sentence- Lack Of Experience and skills
Supporting Details- Employer prefer graduates with
experience to ensure their economic competitiveness and
save money to train new inexperience employee. skills such
as proficiency in language, communication, ICT are the main
attraction to employers.

1.INTRODUCTION
General Statement- Unemployment among
graduates in Malaysia has become a serious
problem as the numbers increases.

CAUSES OF
UNEMPLOYMENT AMONG
GRADUATES IN

MALAYSIA

Background Information
-Despite the fact that thousands of student
graduate from universities, some of them still do
not secure their position in the occupation world.
-A degree scroll is no longer a guaranteed for a job.
Thesis statement- the causes of unemployment
among graduates are choosy job seekers, lack of
guidance and quality of education.

Concluding Sentence- This proves that the causes of

unemployment is lack of experience and skills.

4.BODY
Topic Sentence-Low Quality of Education
Supporting details:- Increasing number of straight As student, 1st class
degree honour, but most failed in job interview or face turnover.
- Education system exam-oriented, students are trained as exam
answering machine rather than hands on and building their
interpersonal.
Concluding Sentence-It is clear that low quality in education to be blame
of the jobless graduates.

5.CONCLUSION
To summarize, there are three causes of unemployment among graduates in Malaysia
such as choosy job seeker, lack of experience and skills graduates and low quality of
education.
Suggestion -Government should take serious action on this issue as it will affect the
economy in long-term period.
-Ministry should continually evaluate programs or courses offered in order to help
higher institution produce quality graduates who are attractive and productive to the
competitive labor market.