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Essay Tip For UPSC
Essay Tip For UPSC
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In a 2 marker question, UPSC specifically mentions that answer it in 20 words. So with that logic,
youre expected to write an essay containing around 2000 words for the 200 marks (18-20 pgs).
But when Examiner doesnt find the mention of Champaran in the initial pages, then he gets an
impression you forgot it = less marks. Hence everything has to be written in its place.
Thats why you must..
Think for 30-45 minutes before you start the Essay writing
1st try to recall everything that you can remember / want to say about the
essay.
Take a pencil and write them all (in very brief) on the end of the answer
sheet
See if there is any chance of adding some diagram or table in it?
Once youre done adding everything that you can think about, regarding the essay- then give those
topics, order of preference. 1.2.3.4.
The order is very important, just like in wedding parties you start with Soupdal-roti andIce
cream in the end.
The order should be :-
1. Introduction
2. Background / History related
3. Main concept / theory / what the subject is about
4. Current scenario related to it.
5. Good sides
6. Negative sides / obstacles
7. Suggested reforms
8. Conclusion
Its easier to criticize non- working things than to fix it. (Remember
this all time during essay.)
Dont give filmy solutions to real life problems. (Munna Bhai MBBS / Slum Dog Millionaire.)
If criticizing Government in the essay alone was going to make you IAS officer, then every
journalist of Aaj Tak would be an IAS officer.
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Tip#5: Quotes
1. Dont make mistakes in writing who said what. e.g. you quote Abraham Lincons sentence and
write George Washington said it. Nothing will make you look more stupid in the eyes of the
examiner than that.
2. Quote exactly as it was said. Mao said Power flows from the barrel of a gun so you should not
write it as
barrel of the gun contains power
or
muzzle of the gun flows the power
You must quote
the quote verbatim. If youre not sure then dont quote it.
Ex. you picked up Do we need nuclear power So you start with how thermal powerstations create pollution, there is huge demand and low supply of electricity, nuke power is
cheap, and then the dangers such as Japanese Tsunami etc.
After 4 pages, your thoughts and ideas are exhausted-youve nothing more to say and
assuming that you write 100 words per page, you realise that only 400 words wont get you
any marks ! Now you cant scratch those pages and write a new essay on new topic, youve
wasted enough time on this one.
So you decide to continue with this nuke-power essay and start rewriting the same stuff you
already stated in different ways and then youll deviate from the main topic- like nuke
power is unsafe as we saw in Japan, so we need to switch to renewable energy source like
Sun, Wind and Water -> then 4 pages on advantages of renewable energy as if this is an
essay on the benefits of Non-renewable energy and not on nuke power, you write about
the pro-cons of hydro-electricity like dams and displacement of people.
Then you realise OMG, displacement of people also applies while making nuke-power
plants like in Maharashtra! so you come back to the topic -half page written but still
youve not filled up enough pages so you start talking about to land-acquisition policy and
start writing the pro-cons.. Another half page on it. Then you think oh i must talk
something about the Indo-US nuke deal so you go on talking about how we havent
signed the CTBT and yet N.S.G gave us clearance and China-Pakistan couldnt stop it so we
are a global power now and we deserve a permanent seat in UNSC! This kind of padding
goes on until time is up.
Youve messed up the whole thing; you totally deviated from the subject. Your essay doesnt
have any flow of thoughts or proper rhythm. The seasoned examiners immediately sniff out
this padding and they dont give much mark for it, your expected score for this kind of
garbage writing is less than 50/200, means even with decent score in all other papers, your
chances of getting interview call is close to zero.
Youve jeopardised your chances of selection in IAS, youve dug your own grave. Thats why
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Same applies while dealing with the big 60 marker question in GS and optional papers. (Not 30
minutes of thinking but at least 5-7 minutes!)
Suggested Reading
Essay is not something that can be learned reading one book or reading for 1 month.
Its a continuous and long process takes some diverse reading before youve enough content to
write something decent and something big enough to fill 20 pages to fetch 100+ marks.
1. Editorials of English newspapers ( but dont get swayed about by either leftist
or capitalist stuff preached by both sides)
2. Magazines like Frontline, Yojana, Kurukshetra. (it gives you the fodder material: statistical
data to quote like how many % illiterate and so on but again dont use too much statistical
data for padding and most importantly dont invent your own case studies and
stat.data)
3. Watch English news channel discussions / debates.
4. See the old question papers and try to make an outline of each and every Essay asked
so far.
India After Gandhi: The History Of The Worlds Largest Democracy by Ramchandra Guha
In 2009s mains attempt, I got only 20/200 marks in the Essay. It was about are we a soft state?. I
wrote it only from the foreign policy and law-n-order point of view, without seeing the cultural
-historical contexts. It was a
the story: do
As usual coaching classes try to anticipate which essays will be asked, and UPSC makes
sure they are not asked. So be prepared for
everything- dont just rely on selected hot-topics like Lokpal and Civil society.
In old times, it was quite predictable, see the papers from 1997 to 2006: almost every year
there is an essay on polity-judiciary, one on women
Lets look @ the 2010 paper. People predicted: there will be some essay on games, due to
CWG or Asiad or even on corruption and good Governance given CWG and 2G scams. But
there was nothing.
Im putting the comparative list of essays asked in last two years (2009 and 2010). Make
your own judgement and prediction and prepare accordingly.
Should a moratorium be imposed on all fresh mining in tribal areas of the country? (2010)
(can be classified as current affairs due to Mines regulation bill)
Are our traditional handicrafts doomed to a slow death? (2009)
The focus of health care is increasingly getting skewed towards the haves of our society2009
International relations
One more bad news: in 1997 to 2006 era, UPSC gave 6 subjects and you had to write one essay, in
2009: five options and in 2010 : only 4 options.