In your letter, respond to the issues raised and express your own

opinions.
Dear Editor,
These days many parents give their children the freedom to make
their own decisions from a very early age. They argue that this
freedom helps children to learn from their mistakes and gives them
the maturity and confidence to deal with the resonsibilities of adult
life. I dont agree. It is totally irresponsible to let young people make
their own choices about friendship, leisure activities and later on, vital
decisions about their future lives.
Some people consider that much of our school education is a waste of
time. These people argue that we are only motivated to learn what is
relevant and useful to us based on our experience. Therefore, as
most of our education happens at such an early age, it is surely
necessary to rethink what people really need to learn at school.

Balanced essay (letter) or opinion essay

(letter)?
Scheme 1
Looking at an issue from both sides. Balanced Argument
1st paragraph clearly mention both sides or the argument.
According to some, Tv is but others think thatIn this essay I will
talk about points against and in favour and give my own opinion on
the matter
2nd main body: points in favour: explanation + examples
3rd main body: points against: explanation + examples
4th conclusion: summarise the main body make a thought
provoking comment. The way we use Tv should
Scheme 2
I agree/ dont agree withStating your opinion and thats it
1st paragraph: State reason for writing+ give your opinion
2nd paragraph: give arguments/reasons to support your opinion+
suggest what can be done
3rd paragraph: give arguments/reasons to support your opinion+
suggest what can be done
4th You can present an opposing viewpoint and contradict it ( bueno
vale, entiendo que pero an as pienso que.)
5th Conclusion. Closing remarks