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    This document contains Clara Washburn's responses to tasks and feedback from her teacher on a photography project. It includes the techniques and artists Clara explored, her responses and analyses, and feedback from her teacher praising her strong work at times but noting areas needing improvement, such as providing more detailed analyses and explanations of her creative process and including contact sheets. In the end, the teacher assessed Clara's work as a C+ and said she needs to address prior feedback to achieve the target grade of B.

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    This document contains Clara Washburn's responses to tasks and feedback from her teacher on a photography project. It includes the techniques and artists Clara explored, her responses and analyses, and feedback from her teacher praising her strong work at times but noting areas needing improvement, such as providing more detailed analyses and explanations of her creative process and including contact sheets. In the end, the teacher assessed Clara's work as a C+ and said she needs to address prior feedback to achieve the target grade of B.

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    This document contains Clara Washburn's responses to tasks and feedback from her teacher on a photography project. It includes the techniques and artists Clara explored, her responses and analyses, and feedback from her teacher praising her strong work at times but noting areas needing improvement, such as providing more detailed analyses and explanations of her creative process and including contact sheets. In the end, the teacher assessed Clara's work as a C+ and said she needs to address prior feedback to achieve the target grade of B.

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    Name:ClaraWashburn

    Task

    Response

    T+/T

    Agoodstartbutmakesuretoanalysethe
    photographslookingatparticulardetailwithin
    theimagenotjustinformationontheArtist.
    (FollowLinktoanalysingsheet)
    YourfirstsetofobservationaregoodsI
    particularlyliketheimageofthegirlhovering
    intotheshop.
    HoweverIwouldlikeyoutousecontact
    sheetsalongsideyourfinaledits.Theyenable
    theexaminertoseeyourvisualthought
    processes.

    Youdemonstrateanunderstandingofthe
    processbutyoushouldhavetwosetsof
    observationsc/wandh/w.Youmustalso
    makelinksbetweenyourworkandother
    Photographersthathaveusedtheprocess
    Yourphotoshopworkisstrongbutplease
    explainhowyouhavecreatedthepiece.

    Longexposure
    FrancescaWoodmanArtistpage
    1stresponse
    2ndresponse
    Photoshopghostimage

    YourinterpretationsarestrongIespecially
    liketheimagesofthecrouchedfigureagainst
    thebrickwall.Theanalysesinthissectionis
    excellentyoumusthavethislevelofwritten
    languagethroughouttheproject.
    .
    WhereisyourphotoshopGhostimage?

    Lightpainting
    MichealBosankoArtistpage
    1stresponse
    2ndresponse

    Bothyourclassworkandhomeworkimages
    aregoodandshowaverygood
    understandingofthetechnique.Thepictures
    ofthelightcarmovingaroundisparticularly
    strong.Youranalysisisalsomuchbetter.
    yourphotoshopknowledgeisalsogoodwell
    done.

    Iwouldlikeyoutorevisitthisselectionof
    images.3and6aregoodbuttheothersare
    todarkandlackanyrealimpact.

    Levitation
    YowaYowaArtistpage
    1stresponce
    2ndresponse

    Zoomblur
    Artistpage
    1stresponse
    2ndresponse

    FinalPiece

    WAG:C+

    Target:B

    FinalComment:
    OverallagoodprojectClarapleasereadthecommentsaboveandmakethe
    necessarychangestoyourwork.

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