Reflective Paragraph for Religion in the World

Reading through my final essay I saw a couple mistakes Ms. Jeon corrected
but I also saw a few that were more centered on my writing goals. Firstly, at the
time when I first made the essay I didnt see much wrong with it but when I was
reading through I began to see errors in grammar and I corrected them. Next, I
went over it again looking for errors in sentence structures found and fixed them
accordingly, I tried to make the sentences flow more so that the writing was easier
to read. Finally, I went back and corrected the details that seemed to trail off and
werent as concrete as others and replaced them with better, more secured points.
All in all, revising was easier with a specific goal in mind and overall the essay was
fairly well done.