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    This document contains feedback from an assessor (AO) on a student's photography project. The assessor provides feedback on four assessment objectives: AO1 - Developing ideas: The assessor notes the student demonstrated strong contextual analysis but needs to reference the work of other artists more as the project progresses. AO2 - Refining work: The assessor comments that the student edits work well but should make stronger links between their work and influencing artists. AO3 - Recording skills: The assessor states the student shows good understanding of theory and technique but no images were provided to illustrate the rule of thirds. AO4 - Presenting personal response: The assessor thinks the student's final idea

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    This document contains feedback from an assessor (AO) on a student's photography project. The assessor provides feedback on four assessment objectives: AO1 - Developing ideas: The assessor notes the student demonstrated strong contextual analysis but needs to reference the work of other artists more as the project progresses. AO2 - Refining work: The assessor comments that the student edits work well but should make stronger links between their work and influencing artists. AO3 - Recording skills: The assessor states the student shows good understanding of theory and technique but no images were provided to illustrate the rule of thirds. AO4 - Presenting personal response: The assessor thinks the student's final idea

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    Tamsin Landscape

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    This document contains feedback from an assessor (AO) on a student's photography project. The assessor provides feedback on four assessment objectives: AO1 - Developing ideas: The assessor notes the student demonstrated strong contextual analysis but needs to reference the work of other artists more as the project progresses. AO2 - Refining work: The assessor comments that the student edits work well but should make stronger links between their work and influencing artists. AO3 - Recording skills: The assessor states the student shows good understanding of theory and technique but no images were provided to illustrate the rule of thirds. AO4 - Presenting personal response: The assessor thinks the student's final idea

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    LandscapeTamsin

    AO

    Task

    Comment

    Mark

    AO1:
    Develop

    NadavKanderanalysis.

    Researchintoother
    photographerswhichinformsthe
    developmentofpersonalideas.

    Developmentofpersonaltheme.

    Breadthofideassupportedby
    researchthroughout.

    Independentapproach.

    Analysisisstrongthroughout.You
    demonstrateastrongcontextual
    awarenessnotonlyofthevisual
    elementsofthepicturebutalso
    thewidercontextualcontextthe
    imageswerecreatedin.Ifeelthe
    themedevelopswellbutasthe
    projectprogressesthereisnoreal
    referencetotheworkofother
    artistsyoumustdothistoimprove
    thissection.

    AO2:
    Refine

    Contactsheets,selectsandedits
    appropriatenessofchoicesmade.

    Annotationbareminimum:www,
    ebiandwhatsnext.

    Experimentationwithideas,
    materials,techniquesand
    outcome.

    Youedityourworkwelland
    demonstrateastrongphotographic
    eye.Asmentionedpreviouslyyour
    annotationisgoodbutIwouldlike
    toseeyourchosenartists
    influencingyourownvisual
    practise,linksmustbemade
    throughout.Yourexperimentation
    isgoodandIfeelthefinalrose
    ideacouldbeverystrong,the
    moreyoumakethebetter.

    AO3:
    Record

    FormalElementsunderstanding

    FormalElementsapplication
    (swimmingpool,coldfallwoods)

    Ruleofthirds

    Controlofexposureetcwhen
    takingaphotograph

    Goodunderstandingoftheoryboth
    inwrittenformandvisuallyyou
    demonstrateexcellent
    understanding.
    whereareyourimagestoillustrate
    theruleofthirds?

    Youruseofexposureand
    technicalskillsaregoodand
    demonstrategoodunderstanding
    oftechnique.

    AO4:
    Present

    Finalpiece

    Connectionsmadetotheworkof
    others.

    AverygoodideaIthinkyouneed
    toconsiderwhereyouwanttoset
    themuptophotographandalso
    howmanyyouwanttomake.

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