Elouise Miny

Resume Peer Review

Preliminary Research:

Job listing mentions learning how to effectively communicate, influence and interact with all types
of customers, vendors and co-workers. Chelsea is majoring in English with a concentration in
technical and professional writing.

Job will teach proper sales techniques and requires high interest in working in
a sales environment. Resume shows previous experience in sales.
Skills listed are well tailored to job description and responsibilities.

Name and Contact Information:

Clearly states her name at the top with address, phone number and email
address listed under.

Objective:

No objective is included.

Education:

School and major is listed. Date of graduation not listed.

No honors mentioned.
Job requires a Bachelors degree. Resume states that Chelsea attends UNCC
but does not mention a Bachelors.

Work Experience:

Employers name and dates of employment clearly listed. No location of job

included.
Work experience shows skills in sales, which is essential to this job listing.
Experience also shows skills working with databases and filing systems.

Activities:

No activities included.

Interests:

No references included.

References:

No references included.

Prose:

Objective should be presented first.

Use of verbs.
Grammar and punctuation is not consistent.

Visual Design:

Design is simple and easy to read.

Use of headings but could be neater and better focused on.

Ethics:

Resume is honest. No misleading or false information.