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Basic Feedback Based Rewrite Template
Basic Feedback Based Rewrite Template
Copy three pieces of writing feedback off of your essays. Then explain
how you could learn from this feedback or questions that you have
about it
Feedback
Writing Retake: Take one body-paragraph of the Into Thin Air essay
you received back today that you would benefit from re-writing.
Identify ONE thing in this piece you know you could do better and list it
below.
Rewrite the excerpt you have selected fixing the ONE significant
problem you identified from the feedback you received. You can
receive re-write credit for the portion of the essay you fix.
This excerpt is from:
The skill Im fixing is:
Rewrite:
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