Name: Caprice

Task: Movement

Response:

T+/T-

Ao1
- Mind map
- Analysis of Natsumi Hayashi (YowaYowa)
- Analysis of Francesca Woodman
- Analysis of Michael Bosanko
- Analysis of 3 selected photographers

Good work, both the practical and analytical work

show good understanding of the process. Continue
to use the analysis sheet and be creative using key
words and technical information when analysing all
the images.

T+

Ao2
Explanation of techniques. Annotations of WWW and EBI.
Progress from 1st to 2nd response.
- Levitation
- Zoom blur
- Movement of a figure
- Light painting

You have explained the techniques using all the

camera setting that shows me your understanding.
However to improve them more, buy a tripod to help
you control your technique. This would be particular
relevant for zoom blur and light painting. Please
complete a full contact sheet for light painting (20
images).

Ao3
Quality of the photographs taken:
- Application of technique
- Composition
- Other success criteria (e.g. Amount of photos)

The compositions are developing well and the

subject has been recorded well in a suitable location.
For future photos, aim to refine your compositions
and avoid unnecessary objects or background
appearing in your photos. Keep the shots clean and
simple, use a blank wall as a backdrop where
relevant. As said above, please get a tripod.

Ao4
Final response:
- Present 6 selected photographs
- Evaluation of WWW, EBI. Why did you choose your 6
selected photo

Your levitation and Woodman images work really

well, try retaking your light painting using a tripod and
see great results. Use a led torch instead of a phone
and continue to be creative. The zoom blur pictures
are excellent, amongst the top in the class, well
done.

Grade: B

Target: B

Final Comment: Good work Caprice, as you can see your target is A, so you have to ask me questions and use the checklist to hit your
target.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by

contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and

selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques and
processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to

their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response

Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.