The main piece of advice that I have received from my group, partners peer review, and from

the instructor is that my rhetorical analysis lacked specificity and detail as well as a clear focus
on which rhetorical appeal I was focusing on in my essay.
So for each example I provide for evidence in my argument, I will make said evidence as
detailed and specific as possible. It is because I refer back to the Blackfish over and over again
throughout the essay that I need the specifics and details. Otherwise the reader will be confused
on which part of the documentary I am referring too.
For the part where I need to focus on which rhetorical appeal the film best uses, it is really as
simple as it sounds. For each example, I just need to elaborate on how much this specific
example establishes the films credibility and authority.