Nadia Essoulami

AO

AO1:
Develop

Task

Comment

Initial artist research

John divola research
Initial framing task
David hockney research
My London Artist selection

Research into other photographers which

informs the development of personal
ideas.
Development of personal theme.
Breadth of ideas supported by
research throughout.
Independent approach.

Your artist analysis needs to be in

depth. At present you are not using
the analysis sheet that describes
key words to use when talking
about photographs. It is key that
you expand your written work
throughout the unit moving away
from
simple
describing
your
thoughts on the images. You must
also make it clear how the work you
are looking at has influenced your
own visual practise.

Mark

T-

Your
john
divola
classwork
responses are good and show a
good understanding of the process
but you must explain what you are
doing when using the framing
technique. Also where is your
homework task.
As mentioned above there is no
analysis about Hockneys work you
must add text to the images.

AO2:
Refine

Second framing tasks

Photo joiners
My london response 1
My london response 2
My London response 3
Contact sheets, selects and editsappropriateness of choices made.
Annotation- bare minimum: www,
ebi and whats next.
Experimentation with ideas, materials,
techniques and outcome.

Each class task has a homework

attached to demonstrate your
understanding and how you have
improved on the technique learnt
in class. you must complete all
the tasks that you have missed to
improve your level
The joiners that you have created
are excellent but again where are
your homework responses?
The initial London response is
good but there should be
evidence of three observations
you only have one.

T-

AO3:
Record

Formal Elements- understanding

Formal Elements- application

Formal elements walk

This is a good section that

demonstrates strong
understanding of the process and
the theory behind it. But again
where is your homework?

T-

The final set of observations is

disjointed and is not what is
required you should have taken
three sets of observations and the
final piece should be a reflection of
the final set of developments.

T-

Control of exposure etc when

taking a photograph
AO4:
Present

Final piece
Connections made to the work of
others.

WAG: C+ TARGET:B