Jed Quilly - landscape

AO

AO1:
Develop

Task

Comment

Initial artist research

John divola research
Initial framing task
David hockney research
My London Artist selection

Mark

Your artist analysis is good and

shows you are looking at the
photograph but you must use the
analysis sheet to go more indepth
and improve your analyse further.

The john Divola analysis and the

Hockney work must be completed
to improve the mark in this section.
Where are your London artists
AO2:
Refine

Second framing tasks

Photo joiners
My london response 1
My london response 2
My London response 3

Your john divola classwork

responses are good and show a
good understanding of the
process but you must explain
what you are doing when using
the framing technique and how
you have refined the technique
from classwork to homework.

Your joiners are good and give a

very good understanding of the
technique. Your homework
images demonstrate refinement
and a further understanding of the
process well done
The london responses are
disappointing and extremely short
and unconnected. You must
rectify this this. The idea should
develop through each set of
observations and then culminate
in a final piece..
AO3:
Record

Formal Elements- understanding

Formal Elements- application

Formal elements walk
AO4:
Present

Final piece

This is again unfinished there are

gaps in the classwork task and
the walk has not even been
attempted.

What and where are your final

pieces.

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