Clara Washburn - landscape

AO

Task

Comment

Mark

AO1:

Initial artist research

Your artist analysis is very good and clearly

Develop

John divola research

demonstrates that you are looking at the

Initial framing task

picture in depth. However I would like you to

David hockney

use more photographic terminology please

research

see the analysis sheet

My London Artist

photographs .

selection

Your John divola analysis is excellent and

talking about

gives a very personal insight into the

pictures.
Your Hockney work must be completed and
expanded to improve the mark in this
section.As mentioned befor use the talking
about photography sheet to do this
Where are your London artists
AO2:

Second framing tasks

Your john divola classwork responses are

Refine

Photo joiners

good and show a good understanding of

the process but you must explain what you

My london response 1

are doing when using the framing

My london response 2

technique and how you have refined the

My London response 3

technique from classwork to homework.

Your joiners are good but there should be

three from class and then a further three

from home
You initial London response is great and
could be developed two ways either
London at night showing the city lit up from
a high viewpoint. The movement of people
in the city linking to the work of Alex
titerenko.

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Record

AO4:

Formal Elements-

This is a good section that displays a good

understanding

photographic eye and an understanding of

Formal Elements-

the technique, well done. I particularly like

application

the image labelled focus taken in north

Formal elements walk

wing this is a very interesting shot.

Final piece

What and where are your final pieces.

Present

WAG B -

Target - B

More photographs like this depicting the city at night

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The movement of people in the city your photograph alongside the work of Alex titerenko