Mitchs Assignment

Great use of a
capital letter
each time for
Fletch

The word panda does

not need a capital letter

Fletch no is not a giant Panda bear, bat he likes honey and sarfing. At
night he watches and dreams of starts, in d day he comes to class. He is
good at fisics, and maf, bat he talks a lot. he talks so much, the teacher
always gets mad at him. bat Fletch always listens and soon forgets, so
he gets in trouble again. Fletch is my frend, becose we both like
lemonade.
Great!
Beginning
sentences with
a capital letter

Commented [ZB1]: Spelling error

Correct spelling is but
Commented [ZB2]: Spelling error
Correct spelling is surfing
Commented [ZB3]: Wrong word
Correct word is stars
Commented [ZB4]: Error
This should say the day and not d day
Commented [ZB5]: Spelling error
Correct spelling is physics

You do not need

a comma here

Commented [ZB6]: Spelling error

Correct spelling is math

Always begin a new

sentence with a
capital letter

Commented [ZB7]: Spelling error

but not bat
Commented [ZB8]: Spelling error
but not bat
Commented [ZB9]: Error
The word should be but not and

Feedback
This was a very good attempt at this assignment Mitch, well done! I have
highlighted positive comments in BLUE boxes which tells you what you have
done correctly.
I have highlighted small grammatical errors in ORANGE boxes. These are just
small things to work on for your next assignment, like capital letters and
correct comma use. I have highlighted in RED any spelling errors and included
their correct spelling in the comments down the side. I have also changed your
first sentence to show how the sentence should read. I have underlined and
written in red where you need to use plurals of some of the words.
Wonderful work on this assignment Mitch! Use these few pointers in order to
improve on your next assignment. Great work!

Commented [ZB10]: Spelling error

Correct spelling is friend
Commented [ZB11]: Spelling error
Correct spelling is because