1.

Organization:

(a) Did the group have an effective plan for

the whole presentation?
Based on the video slide, group members
actually have an effective plan for the whole
presentation slide. Beside, group members
expression also improve a lot .For example,
presenter Albert Ha Heng Hock has not eh or
ah while he presents. This will attract
audience. Presenter Kiing Kiu Hwang also
improve his presentation skill because he
maintain eye contact while going on
presentation.
(b) Did the presentation have a clear
introduction, body and conclusion?
Our group presentation have a clear
introduction, body and conclusion while during
presentation. Each members introduce clear
part when they do their presentation and

persuade audiences buy the product Natural

Republic Aloe Vera. They straight forward to
the benefit and the uses of the product for
attracting the favorable impression of
audience. For example, presenter Gan Kai Seng
has clear introduction so audience will have
interest know more about Natural Republic
Aloe Vera.
(c) Did the presenters stick to their
designated topic?
Based on this point, actually all our group
members have stick their point to the topic. For
example, group member Gan Kai Seng has
clear present introduction while during
presentation and group member Kiing Kiu
Hwang present body care when using product
natural republic during presentation.

(d) Did each group member develop their

part of the presentation in an orderly
fashion?
Based on video, all the group members
develop their part of the presentation in an
orderly fashion. So, they improve a lot if
compare with the last time bad presentation
.Each member present in the way of step by
step so that audiences can understand
knowledge that the presenter given to
audiences. For example, presenter Ong Ai Nie
focus on the audience, this kind of attitude will
make the audience more understand what she
are talking about.
(e) Were transitions between sections and
presenters effective?
Based on video, they had remind the audience
they already ending their part. Our group
member also introduce the next speaker while

they want to pass their time to the next

person. This will make audiences understand
what the presenter doing on the stage. Besides
that, all group member also improve on their
gesture while their having their presentation.

2.

Non-verbal Communication:

(a) Did the presenters develop eye contact

with members of the audience?
Every presenters develop eye contact with
audience when they do their presentation.
Making eye contact with the audience is very
important for you to notice to the audience
which is facing problem about your topic. From
the video, we can notice that the presenter can
be more qualified, skilled, competent, and
valuable because they keep to make eye
contact with audience. Besides, presenters
become more trustworthy, honest, and sincere
about the content of their presentation.

(b) Hand and body movements are

purposeful, not distracting.
Presenters provide appropriate hand and body
movements which are purposeful and not
distracting. An appropriate body language can
cause a presenter remain a good impression to
the audience. Besides, it can point out the
important parts of the presentation to the
audience and let them can remember it.
(c) Presenters do not read exclusively from
note cards or visual aids.
Presenters do not read from exclusively from
note cards and visual aids but they memories
and understand what they present about. They
keep to focus to the audience while they doing
presentation instead of read from the note or
visuals aids because they do fully preparation
before the presentation. This can help them to

enhance a presentation by adding impact and

strengthening audience involvement.
(d) Presenters face the audience while
speaking.
From the video, we can see every presenter
face the audience while speaking. Facing the
audience can let a presenter look confidence
about their content. Besides, you can capture
your audiences attention to your presentation.
Furthermore, you can show your respect to the
audience if you face to the audience but not
show your back side.
(e) Presenters smile when doing
presentation
Presenters smile when they are doing
presentation. Presenters start their
presentation with a smile can let audience feel
comfortable and friendly with the presenter.
Besides, smile when you doing your

presentation can also release your stress and

do not feel fear on the stage.
3.

Oral communication:

(a) Did presenters speak from brief notes

rather than from complete texts?
The presenters speak without looking at the
notes because they memorize all the notes and
present with a good body language. The
presenters memorize the main point and
explain the main point by using their own
words. The presenters give the examples with
their word so that the audience could
understand better.
(b) Did the presenters speak audibly and
energetically?
Presenters speak audibly and energetically in
their presentation. The presenters speak with
pitch of voice and full of confidence. During
presentation, the presenter be professional

with speak the sound of the voice changes as

the rate of vibrations varies to attract attention
of audience. The presenters also have a good
energy and smile toward the audience while
they speak during presentation.
(c) Did the presenters avoid physical and
vocal distractions while speaking?
Yes. The presenters speak clearly so that the
audience can understand easily for what has
been delivered. The presenter does not shout
or whisper during presentation because it can
distract attention of audience. The presenter
feeling comfortable while speaking in front of
audience to avoid physical and vocal
distraction. When he or she is feeling nervous
during the presentation, therein vocal
distraction can be happen.
(d) Did the group appear interested in, and
committed to, the audience?

 Yes. Our group appear interested in and

committed to the audience and make some
joke to attract the audience with festive
atmosphere because our group persuading
effectively. The audiences will not feeling bored
during your presentation when you are making
some joke but make sure it not too much.
When the presentation started, the presenters
greet the audience for a positive impression.
(e) Did the group try to be creative in their
approach to the topic?
Yes. Our group is the greatest performance
shortfall in creativity and flair by using visual
aids to our topic. Based on video that we
recorded, some slide had use visual aids to
make the audience focus on our topic. The
audiences had looking at new visual aids while
the speaker is addressing another point. For
persuasive presentation, we added pictures to

beautify our slides and using some suitable

fonts to get audience attention.
(f)

Did the presenters speak in a clear voice

that could easily be heard by everyone in the

audience?
Yes. During our presentation, the presenters
speak with clear voice level and maintain their
eyes contact to the audience. The audience
can heard or listen clearly and understand well
for what has been delivered from the
presenters. The presenters have strong eyes
contact towards audience while speaking on
the stage. Based on our video, we speak slowly
and clearly voice so that the receiver can listen
and understand well for what has been
delivered from us.
(g) Changes volume, pace and inflection
appropriate to maintain audience attention.

 Yes. The first impressions influence the

audience's attitudes to the presenters are with
dress appropriately for the occasion. And we be
prepared and believe in ourselves before the
presentation begins. Some of the presenter
change volume of the voice with the hands
gestures to get the audience attention during
presentation. Then, some of the presenter
focus on the audience with keep moving whole
space on the stage and smile to the audience
based on our video.
4.

Visual Aids

(a) Visual aids are constructed of

sufficient size and are displayed so they
can see clearly by all members of the
audience.
During presentation, presenter prepare the
clearly slide words and large enough. So
audience can see the slide clearly. Besides,
slide had also use standard form such as Arial

which look like formal. Presentation slide had

also insert graphs or pictures are large enough
for your audience to see. Presenter had also
use some pictures to illustrate your point
rather than words repeat what present on the
stage.
(b) How many visual aids should be used?
The number depend on the speaker, the
speaking style and the length of the
presentation. Based on video that we recorded,
some slide had use visual aids to get audience
attention. A visual aids had also not visible
after it has been used and the speaker has
finished referencing it. The audiences had
looking at a new visual aids while the speaker
is addressing another point.
(c) When appropriate graphics, animation
and color are used effectively to enhance the
intended message.

 Based on video, our group had fulfill the

colorful part, we had use color to highlight
important part. Besides, we also use bold or
italic to increase audience readability. For the
purpose of to get audience attention, we had
use bright color to make small objects stand
out.
Based on graphic part, we had use graphics to
show our presentation, we use some graphic to
represent the following elements in our
technical writing. Graphic had also used while
we are using too many words to explain
something.
Lastly, animation part, based on our slide, our
group have use some easy and clear
animation. Animation used because it use to
attract audiences attention. Besides,
animation also make the slide more interesting.

(d) Visual aids are relevant and are seamless

incorporated into the presentation.
Based on our presentation slide, our group
have use relevant visual aids while present the
product. We use relevant visual aids because
we want to persuade audience to buy and let
the audience do not confuse while presenter
talking about their product. Relevant visual
aids important in presentation because this will
show that a clear link between what the
audiences hears and see.
(e) Selection of the best visual aids medium
to use.
The time and resources that are available to
develop the visual aids. According to video, our
group had select the best visual aids medium
because a good presentation must have the
best visual aids. Presenter have prepared
enough time for static computer slide

presentation can be modified easily in front

audiences
5.

Content:

(a) Did the group communicate an

understandable amount of information about
the topic without overwhelming the audience
with excessive detail?
Yes. The group does communicate an
understandable amount of information about
the topic. The group does giving excessive
detail about the topic to the audience.
Audience can understand about the topic due
to the clear supporting detail and information.
(b) Did the group use a variety of supporting
materials to develop their main points?
Yes. The group does. The group is giving a
meaningful main point and got full and
understandable elaboration on the main point.
The main point is very clear because that are

enough information and examples on the point.

The group also give a very good explanation to
the point.
(c) Was the supporting material relevant?
Yes. The supporting materials are relevant to
the main point that the topic has been choose
by the group member. The supporting
materials that provided by the group are
enough to support the main point. The group
also always shows the supporting material to
show the used or function and the benefit of
the supporting material
(d) Did the group members appear
conversant with and knowledgeable about
the subjects presented?
Yes. All the group members are knowledgeable
about the subject that we presented. All of the
group members are practice and done well
during the presentation. For example, when the

audience ask question, the presenter can

answer the audience and give a good example
to ensure the audience understand the answer.
(e) Did the group fulfill time expectations?

Yes. The group has fulfill the time expectation

that has been assign which is 20 minutes in the
presentation. They divide the time to each
other by around 1 minute per person in their
presentation and finish on time. The group has
comply with the demand.