WRITING REFLECTION # ____2______

Mrs. Cracchiolo (2014-2015)

PIECE OF WRITING _______________eddopis______________________________
In class writing OR out of class writing
1. Looking at the feedback, what/where do you think you did particularly well?

I think that I did well n the thisis statement and the intro paraghraph

2. Looking at the feedback, what do you think was the area you need the most
improvement in and why? (Be Specific)

I need to improve on making my body paraghraphs stronger and more detailed

3. Did the loop cycle work for you? Why or why not?

Yes from what I could understand

4. Body paragraph construction is the most important part of your paper since this is the
area that uses evidence to back up your claims. Looking at your paper and feedback,
rate yourself overall on the following elements that correspond to the loop structure.
STRONG
AVERAGE
WEAK
MISSING
Topic Sentences

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Suppoting Details (SD)
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Explanations (EXP)
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Closings (CLOS)
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Transitions
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Incorporating Quotes
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Set up quotes

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Used quote and documenting properly______
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Explain relevance

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Concluding sentences
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OVERALL RATING
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5. The big question: based on your comments, checklist where you rated yourself on body
paragraph structure, and overall score, what NEW GOAL do you have for your next
writing assignment? In other words, what skills will you try to focus on in the future and
why?
GOAL:
To work on my body paraghraps and make sure that my supporting datails are also on point

WHY:
Because I want to be a better writer and I know that this will help a lot

6. Any other feedback youd like to share??

no