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In Bloom Draft 1
In Bloom Draft 1
In Bloom Draft 1
by
Victoria Tesoriero
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First Draft
vic.tesoriero@gmail.com
OVER BLACK
HECTOR (V.O)
I still remember the first time I
smelt brain...
We hear a loud nasal inhale of breath.
FADE IN:
INT.KITCHEN - DAY
We see the POV of a elderly woman cooking scrambled eggs
over a stove top in slow motion. She is adding salt and
turning the eggs.
HECTOR (V.O)
My grandfather would split open the
skulls of the rabbits he killed on
our property. I guess my infant
self did not find it at all
peculiar when those same brains
found their way into my
grandmothers famous scrambled
eggs.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT.MORGUE - DAY
HECTOR (V.O)
And I remember the last time I
smelt brain...
We hear a loud nasal exhale of breath.
We see HECTOR, male in his late twenties in purple scrubs.
He walks through a long room completely lit by low hanging
fluorescent tube lights. We hear his footsteps echo loudly
around the room.
We see Hector pass three stainless steel dissection tables
and a long reclining, leather chair. Next to this is a large
transparent screen suspended from the ceiling. As he passes
this he taps the thin frame of the screen, which causes it
to light up and display the message "Good Morning".
Hector continues to walk towards the large conveyor tray
refrigerator on the back wall.
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SARAH
Now go note down some observations
from the victims bodies would ya?
Anything you can see that might
tell us something. While I try to
decipher this...
Sarah gestures at the screen.
Hector nods, still clearing his throat from the coughing
fit, he takes out his tablet, extends it to fit between his
palms.
Hector makes his way to the bodies on the dissection tables.
He bends over the first body who was missing his left arm
from the elbow down. His elbow was covered in black, crusted
burns that continued up his arm past his shoulder.
Hector peaks over his right shoulder at Sarah.
Hector than aggressively sniffs the victims elbow.
Hector begins to cough uncontrollably and again repetitively
hits his chest with his palm.
We see in great detail Hectors jaw clench, his nostrils
begin to flare, his pupils dilate.
He sharply turns his head over his shoulder back at Sarah.
He hear him produce a deep nasal inhale.
CUT TO:
We see Hector standing behind Sarah. He is breathing in
heavily and producing a deep animalistic grunt with every
exhale. We see a droplet of perspiration caress Hectors
right temple and jaw line before falling onto the tip of the
bonesaw in Hectors right hand, giving the saw a slight
sparkle before the droplet hits to the white tile floor.
Sarah slowly turns her head over her shoulder, before
turning her body quickly to face him.
HECTOR
I can smell it on you, you know, I
saw you on the screen, it was you.
I can smell the explosive powder on
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HECTOR (contd)
you, like I can smell its residue
on them...
Hector gestures his head towards the bodies on the
dissection tables.
HECTOR(CONTD)
But no one is going to believe me
unless...I show them.
Hectors nostrils flare, his upper lip tightens and his
mouth widens, salivating he stares at Sarah.
We see Sarah, eyes wide, we can hear her frantically
breathing. Her neck becomes tight with a harsh swallow of
saliva.
We see from behind the transparent screen.
SARAH
(screaming)
No! NO!... Please!... DONT!
Hector strikes Sarahs head with a bone saw.
Now we only see Hectors upper body. Hector repetitively and
aggressively hammers down with the bone saw. We see blood
and brain matter spray up and splatter on his face.
He stops, panting Hectors eyes are wide as he observes
Sarahs remains.
We hear the sound of the bone saw hitting the tile floor.
We see Hector bend down and begin to tear pieces of brain
matter from Sarahs skull.
He pauses, looking at the cerebral matter in his hand.
Hector then begins to slowly gnaw at the brain. Then Hector
starts violently tearing off pieces and eating them.
Hector stretches out his arm over to the chair and grabs the
visual visor in which he then places over his eyes.
We see Hector pull apart another piece of brain with his
hands. Squeezing it, some of the matter break apart and drop
between his fingers to the floor. He then lifts the piece of
brain up to his nose.
He inhales deeply.
FADE TO BLACK:
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THE END