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Cep Leadership Report - Edits To Khorasan
Cep Leadership Report - Edits To Khorasan
Cep Leadership Report - Edits To Khorasan
Khorasan
General comments:
Remove the Place[s] of Operations section entirely.
Replace Type[s] of Ideologies: with Ideologies and Affiliations:
Please make these changes on past and future reports, including all reports below.
Thanks!
Leaders
Sanafi al-Nasr
Please remove the brackets around Sunni
Executive Summary
o Remove on in the sentence: Nasr has an extensive presence on online
o In the last sentence of Exec Summary, capitalize the following (and add periods
to the U.N.): According to the U.N.s Al-Qaeda Sanctions Committee
History Timeline
o Entry for December 2013: Remove quote marks on Jabhat al-Nusra and replace
it with the Nusra Front (without any quotations marks.)
Mohammed Islambouli
Please remove the brackets around Sunni
Extremist Entity:
o Change Islambouli Brigade to Islambouli Brigades
Timeline:
o 1985: change fled to flees and moved to moves
o 1990: Date should be 1990s, not 1990.
o November 19, 1995: Insert a between becomes formal and change
Islambouli Brigade to Islambouli Brigades
o 2004: Lowercase Finance Minister and change The Islambouli Brigade to
The Islambouli Brigades
o 2011: change was to is
Muhsin al-Fadhli
Please remove the brackets around Sunni
Executive summary
o Second sentence: Add Al- before Fadhli to read Al-Fadhli is a longtime alQaeda operative. Please carry this throughout the report. (Only capitalize Al-
when it starts a sentence. When it appears in the middle of a sentence, please
write al-Fadhli)
Umit Yasar Toprak
Please remove the brackets around Sunni