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Feedback; characteristic
descriptive:
To make pupil understand better.
Know which aspect to improve.

MARRIAGE
you have a nice and neat handwriting.
It is a very good effort and idea.
However, I think you can write better if
you have more vocabularies.
Vocabularies will help to describe your
idea correctly. This will make your
essay more interesting.

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