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Creative Writing Seminar Piece Part 2
Creative Writing Seminar Piece Part 2
Creative Writing Seminar Piece Part 2
I stomped my shoes on the rug at the door getting what was left
of the wet and cold feeling off of my body and tossed my jacket on the
coat hanger to my right. I looked ahead to see my mom sauting up
some sort of vegetable medley at the stove.
Hey mom, smells great in here! I smiled in her direction as she
turned around. She fixed her hair into a blonde messy bun that was
tied up and out of her face.
I wasnt expecting you to be back so early from work! Slow,
because of the weather huh? She wiped her hands on a dishtowel as
the vegetables she was cooking sizzled in the pan behind her.
Really slow, like I only made $25 dollars, slow.
Well, every little bit you save will help when you have to pay off
these college loans youre racking up, she turned back to the stove
but still kept the conversation going. Can you believe that youre
going to be starting your last semester before becoming a senior? Its
so crazy to me.
Looking back at my mom I nodded, but I couldnt believe it.
These past three years seem to have been the fastest years of my life.
I still didnt have an Internship yet and didnt care, because I couldnt
really picture myself doing anything with my major. Talking about
college and my future with jobs definitely wasnt my favorite thing to
do. The best thing that happened to me in college so far was my
boyfriend, Ryan. Right now the only thing I could picture myself doing
was waitressing at Maggies Diner for the rest of forever.
Travis still at school? I asked, changing the subject quickly
Mhm, some friends should be dropping him off soon. Could you
set the table awhile dear? she added more seasoning to the pan.
Making my way over to the drawer where we kept the silverware,
something on the floor caught my eye. At first I thought it was a gold
earring, something of my moms, but then I realized it was my dads
wedding band. It looked like it had been perfectly placed there, even
though I knew it must have been dropped. I picked it up off the wooden
floor and held my hand out towards my mom.
Looks like somebodys husband dropped his nicest accessory, I
laughed showing her the ring in my palm.
Did you find that on the dresser today? she had a concerned
look in her eyes.
I pointed to the spot on the floor I had retrieved the gold band
from, No mom, I found it right there.
She let out a deep sigh and turned off the stove.
Is everything alright? she wouldnt look at me when I asked.
Mom?
Everythings fine Maura, its just usually I find the ring sitting on
the dresser. her voice was firm as she spoke.
I put the ring down on the counter and took four plates out of the
cabinet for dinner. She looked over at me and shook her head, We
only need three plates.
I thought you said Travis was going to be home soon?
He is. Your dad isnt eating dinner with us though. He has
another late night at the office.
The snow was coming down so heavy now that all I could see
was white through the window, no ground, no sky, just one porcelain
sheet. The window almost turned into a mirror because of this and I
focused on the reflection of my mom washing the dishes behind me.
The smell of chicken and seasoned vegetables was fading now as the
strong scent of Dawn dish soap took its place. I turned from the sofa
where I had been sitting to stare at my dads wedding band still on the
counter. I could tell from the conversation we had earlier that it
bothered my mom more than she wanted to let on. She vigorously
scrubbed the final dish and put the back of her hand to her forehead.
I think Im going to go get a shower, so could you or Travis dry
the dishes for me please?
I nodded, knowing Travis wouldnt be of any help as I could hear
the sound of his television blaring loudly from his bedroom. She picked
dads ring up, put it in her pocket and headed to her bedroom. I looked
at the time on the stove clock, 9:45. He should have been home an
hour ago. The sound of the faucet in my moms bathroom, drown out
the sounds of South Park characters in my brothers room as I started
to wipe off the dishes.
My phone started vibrating from the kitchen table. My friend
Lacey was calling.
Hey, whats up girl? I asked as I picked up the phone.
Hey Maur, Are you coming down town tonight?
I was puzzled at her question while looking out the window at the
white abyss outside.
Thats like 30 minutes for me to drive, so with this weather
probably not! I squeezed my phone between my tilted head and
shoulder while I finished drying the last of the dishes.
Ugh, come on! School starts back up soon and then youll never
wanna come out until Spring Break! Why dont you have Ryan just
come and get you, hes already here? Lacey started to shout, as the
music in the bar behind her got louder.
Huh? Ryans at home catching up on school work tonight, he
wouldnt want to go out.
Nice try girl, Ryan just walked in here a couple of minutes ago!
School work my ass! But whatever, have fun being lame tonight, the
phone line went silent.
Did she just say that Ryan was at the bar? Theres no way he
could be though, he didnt want to stay over here tonight, much less
go get drunk without me. Why wouldnt he ask if I wanted to come
along? I looked down at my phone and went to my text messages,
scrolling through the conversation Ryan and I had since he dropped me
off from work earlier today.
Im home babe
Glad ur home
safe, about to
start dinner.
Text you after
It had been just about an hour since I texted Ryan last, he never
answered me and I assumed its because he was sleeping. I didnt want
to call Lacey back after she pretty much hung up the phone on me for
being lame, but I wonder if she really saw Ryan or just said that to
get me down there. I stared down at the text messages glowing from
my screen once more and decided to just call him myself. One ring
later and my call went straight to voicemail:
Hey, youve reached Ryan, I cant get to the phone right now.
Just leave a message and Ill call ya back. A near deafening beep
screamed at my ear as I hung up the call.
My phone vibrated my hand as I looked down reluctantly
assuming Ryans name would appear. I was disappointed as I saw
Laceys name come across my screen. I immediately opened the
message.
I sat at the kitchen table for over an hour. Nothing was on the
television, nobody was talking to me, my mom and brother had gone
to bed a while ago, it was just my phone and I. I mustve called Ryan
10 times by now, each time going to voicemail. No texts. Nothing. My
stomach turned with every minute that passed. Something was
extremely wrong. He left with a six-pack? I cant remember the last
time hes even drank during the week. It made me sick, the thought of
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him purposely ignoring me. My eyes felt heavy as I stared down at the
screen, but I knew a sleepless night was in my future. I crossed my
arms and put my head down on the table.
My sleeve was saturated with drool when I suddenly woke up
from a sound on the porch. I sluggishly stood up from the dining chair I
had made my temporary bed and turned on the lights above the
counter. Part of me hoped it might be Ryan, coming over to explain
himself. I checked my phone on to see the time, 3:30 a.m. The sound
of the doorknob turning startled me and I watched the door carefully
until I saw my dads familiar polished shoe step on the carpet. Not
noticing me just yet, he gently shut the door. It was odd watching him
sneak into his own house. His teeth chattered with the cold air behind
him and the smell of cigarette smoke entered the room as he did.
It was so quiet that it felt weird to speak, Dad?
He stumbled while taking off his shoes, surprised at the sound of
my voice, Maura? a yawn came from his mouth, what are you still
doing up?
As his hand moved away from his mouth to cover his yawn I
noticed the absence of his wedding band. My eyes shifted to my
parents bedroom where I imagined my mom cuddled alone in her
white duvet cover. I fell asleep out here, I havent heard from Ryan all
night and was calling him for hours. My eyes got tired of looking at my
phone screen I guess.
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